Happy Whatever-You-Celebrate! This is supposed to be
kaiwynn's week, but the holidays got in her way, so I've switched with her. I couldn't bear not to write Christmas fic on Christmas, so I don't have the next installment of A Fragment of Light, but I hope to have it for you sometime during the week so that we'll be on schedule for
jacyevans's next chapter.
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I was actually hoping that someone would post this a bit early.
"...my awareness locked onto the way the muscles rippled in his thigh. Suddenly the car wasn’t moving fast enough." That was total yum :)
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...okay, off to actually read the fic now XD
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"Bella blushed violently at the implication and ducked into the dressing room with the garment. I laughed. As if she was so innocent." The first paragraph is in third person right? So I think the 'I laughed' is inconsistent?
Other than that, it was very entertaining :)
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Though I was disappointed to see you haven't added to "A fragment of light" this was a great christmas fic.=)!!
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