SMMFC: 1/30 - Devotion

[twilight_eos]

Title: Devotion
Theme: End of Days
Genre: Angst
Version: Manga
Rating: PG
Summary: In the mind of Beryl.

Comments

[sheankelor]

Nice Beryl emotion there, very nice.

[sea_thoughts]

Brrr, chilling, great insight into the mind of someone so obsessed, they can't look beyond their obession any more. I particularly like how you capitalise 'He', which emphasises Endymion's divinity in Beryl's mind.