Comments | twilight_ave: #10 Made of Blood and Bones (2/5)

twilight_ave

#10 Made of Blood and Bones (2/5)

Jan 15, 2007 23:55

Title: Made of Blood and Bones

Pairing: JaeHo, Jaemin (unintended), YooSu, YooSuMin

Raiting: PG-13 for the angst (and the language for this chap.)

Disclaimer: Fan Fiction

Summary: This is a full blown drama of what happens to the boys after Yunho’s encounter with the cynoacrilic drink and takes place after the first radio interview the five of them had ( Read more... )

yoochun x junsu x changmin, yoochun x junsu, jaejoong x yunho, jaejoong x changmin, dbsk, fanfic

Comments 12

darku January 15 2007, 17:32:34 UTC

I'm a new reader, and I must admit, I stray away from things that say they have angst, but I couldn't help but read this and I've fallen in love with it. It's so beautifully written and sad and I just love, love, love it.

“There should be signs like that, clear and straightforward, telling you if your making the right decision” He paused, took a drag of his cigarette and exhaled, “or that you’re going to be hurt so bad that you don’t think you’ll be able to breathe the same again.”

That's a wonderful line! I could just picture Yoochun saying something like that, too.

twilight_ave January 16 2007, 04:53:18 UTC

I'm glad you loved it! And it's not really angst.. or it won't be one for long cause im new to writing angst ^^

And Chunnie's line was playing around in my head for so long that i just HAD to write it down lol

aishix January 15 2007, 18:36:51 UTC

:D
It's so wonderfully written.
Seriously. I can't find the right words...
Except that I love this fic. :D

twilight_ave January 16 2007, 04:56:03 UTC

i love that you love it ^^ ♥

rebelyon5anghel January 15 2007, 21:17:58 UTC

wow.
really.
it's like.. wow.

twilight_ave January 16 2007, 05:06:48 UTC

♥

on a sidenote, i really loved the layout you made on dbsk (can't remember where&when i had seen it but it was really really nice^^)

rebelyon5anghel January 16 2007, 13:07:32 UTC

ooh.
thank you. :D

haha.

clicheterms January 15 2007, 22:47:35 UTC

i really like this, except i'm kinda confused where you're going w. the angst.

“I’m going to do it”, Jae announces just loud enough for the three other members to hear when Yunho had left for the bathroom. No one says anything against the determination in his voice and the stubborn set of his jaw, there are only awkward movements, unvoiced words and a hesitant nod from the three before they headed for the car.
what are they doing oO;;?
and why is yunnie so mad over a cake?

<3 tiffo

twilight_ave January 16 2007, 05:24:49 UTC

I based the plot on Yunnie's glue-drink and the first radio interview all 5 of them were in after the incident.

So the story starts after the interview where Yunnie is still emotionally traumatized over the entire thing and is paranoid over every food given by the fans. The bit you qouted was Jae telling the guys that he was going to push Yunnie's buttons and, you know, push him to recover. *gah! I know i totally forgot to make those details clear in the story*

mienaku January 16 2007, 05:02:59 UTC

..Still giving me chills! Poor Chunnie!!!...I'm a bit confused on what all everyone is reacting to!! But the fic is so damn realistic! I love it and can't wait for the next chapter.