Title: Good Enough Fandom: Tenkuu no Escaflowne Characters: Van Fanel and Kanzaki Hitomi Prompt: 022 Enemies Word Count: 290 Rating: G-PG Author's Notes: Spoilers be here!
it's wonderful, a real insight to Van, so thanks for that.
but this: Van told himself he wouldn't be good enough until he'd beat the man that had held his love entranced for so long. sounds like Van is in love with Allen. *giggle* "not that there's anything wrong with that." (sorry, do you watch Seinfeld?)*laughs*
Ohhhh, I loved this. I thought you captured Van's rage and thoughts on the kiss *grumbles about that kiss* wonderfully. I could totally see him thinking those thoughts while fighting Allen. Great Job!
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it's wonderful, a real insight to Van, so thanks for that.
but this:
Van told himself he wouldn't be good enough until he'd beat the man that had held his love entranced for so long.
sounds like Van is in love with Allen. *giggle* "not that there's anything wrong with that." (sorry, do you watch Seinfeld?)*laughs*
so, thanks!!
cheers.
--Lex
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I loved this drabble, it's very well written and very in-character.
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