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[FANFIC] To Insanity and Back ch.4

Jun 01, 2011 19:55

title: To Insanity and Back
author: Twiglet71
genre: angst
length: chaptered (4/?)
pairing: Yunho/ jaejoong
rating: pg13
summery: As he started to scream his face was pushed into the ground.
Warning: This chapter contains sexual violence.
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pairing: yunho/jaejoong, angst, author: t, violence, genre:angst, rating: pg 13

Comments 6

rainycakes June 1 2011, 19:59:38 UTC

Oh My God. I knew something was supposed to happen all this time that I've been reading, since the beginning, and I've been on edge a little, waiting for it to happen. But now that it has happened, I'm at a loss for something proper to say. :( For something so precious to him to be taken away like that...and right before he had planned to give himself to Yunho, too! *cries* I can only hope Yunho will be there for him with some form of understanding, at least, and comfort~

twiglet71 June 1 2011, 23:40:04 UTC

I hope it wasn't too traumatic. I wanted to convey the horror of rape without going into too much detail and smut. The effects of rape carry on long after the act and the victim has to find their inner strength and needs the strength of those around them in order to survive. Yunho will be there for him but Jae will be there for Yunho too eventually. I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow and that is when we will see Yunho's reaction. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment xxx

chloe1910 June 2 2011, 02:24:45 UTC

The dreaded scene had happened T___T Thank god it was not that graphical :(
Since Jae managed to claw that bastard, I hope they find something in Jae's fingernail to look for DNA matching or something. Anyway, that asshole left his sperm in Jae right? That should have enough evidence to catch the bastard. I'm glad that someone found Jae and he's receiving treatment now.
Oh Twiglet, *hugschu*

twiglet71 June 2 2011, 15:58:02 UTC

I hope you found it acceptable. I think too much detail would have been distressing and was not needed. You are right about the DNA thing :) I will post the next chapter very soon so thank you for reading and always commenting. I am hugging you back xxxx

shnnii June 2 2011, 20:28:31 UTC

omg poor jae ;(

spudacus_1 July 6 2011, 18:39:28 UTC

i think the 2 most traumatic points for me were the words jae was sayign in his head when it started and the horriblely sad fact that hewas gonna have sex with yunho that night. thats all heart breaking hun. i mena you coudlah ad it the day after or something hehe

it was well written a bit harrowing and i coudl deffo picture it all there, i could feel the dirt and the actions and the sterility ofthe hospital etc. really well written and at least that sceneis donewith.

xxxx