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twiggyrocks2815

Just Can't Decide What I'm Running From

Jul 05, 2012 00:18

Title: Just Can't Decide What I'm Running From
Pairing: Eli/Kevin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When Eli and Kevin go to Vegas on vacation, will Eli finally admit his real feelings? Or will he push Kevin away to protect himself?

( What happens in Vegas... wait, what actually happened in Vegas? )

pg-13, elvin, one-shot, u-kiss

Comments 24

celine930309 July 5 2012, 08:55:38 UTC

what a way to confess~~~ well done~~

twiggyrocks2815 July 6 2012, 01:26:11 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you think so!

blacknox17 July 5 2012, 14:02:05 UTC

aww this was perfect.
I was missing your stories and Im glad ur back with this wonderful fic ^^
The end was freakin hilarious hehe

twiggyrocks2815 July 6 2012, 01:25:35 UTC

:D Thank you so much! I'll be smiling for the rest of the day. Hope to bring you more soon!

bubbles_girl22 July 5 2012, 16:11:26 UTC

This story is so wonderful :) Nothing like a sweet Elvin story to make my day.....

twiggyrocks2815 July 6 2012, 01:20:28 UTC

Sweet comments make mine, thank you! :D

seroun July 6 2012, 04:21:37 UTC

I loved it! :D

twiggyrocks2815 July 6 2012, 04:22:39 UTC

Yay! Thanks, I'm glad!

0_degrees_elvin July 6 2012, 07:55:00 UTC

Twiggy! At last!
Ahh god, this made me so happy, I can't stop smiling... or rereading it. ^_^
Kevin saying Eli will be the only pigeon in the desert (priceless), Kevin's attempts to seduce Eli, especially that dancing... O_O ("Kevin dances better than any girl"? True fact. :P), the commentary in Eli's head as he runs to shower... repeatedly... "I just want you to be honest for once. If not with me, then at least with yourself" (that was a really good line)... Eli's panic when Kevin is gone... and how even in Elvin land SooHoon is real. :P
This was really funny and cute, but it was equally heart-wrenching. I loved being inside Eli's head as he went through all that doubt (you know how much I love angsty Eli ^_~), and I could've cried at the part where he decides to stop fighting himself, it was so beautiful. I also could've cried over the loss of that breakfast tray... :( haha
I'm just gonna fill in for myself everything else that happened in that hotel room... ^_~
Pleeeeeease don't second-guess yourself, just keep writing more. ^_^ <

twiggyrocks2815 July 6 2012, 08:51:49 UTC

Oh Zero Q____Q

I never understood how my brother could be friends with people total strangers over the internet, and then you happened.
You. Are. Wonderful. And I do not know what to say in response to your response. Except that I am so glad you like it! You've said everything I was going for and more, and honestly I will probably be dancing around my house like a giddy idiot all day. Or all the parts of the day not spent writing!
And yes, SooHoon is always real! :D

A million hearts sent in your direction <3

0_degrees_elvin July 6 2012, 09:07:25 UTC

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:D
Just returning the love you gave to me first.
<3
<3
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