The True Color of Death

Jun 09, 2012 13:20

Title: The True Color of Death
Pairing: Eli/Kevin (Elvin)
Rating: R
Wordcount: 570
Warnings: angst, attempted suicide
Summary: Short piece inspired by the MV for A Shared Dream, a quote from the book Blue Bloods by Melissa de la Cruz, and a scene from a book called The Resurrectionist (which I don't recommend ( Read more... )

drabble, possible triggers, r, elvin, u-kiss

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existentbeing June 9 2012, 22:30:53 UTC
The more of your stuff I read, the more I decide I like your writing. I don't really have anything to say about this fic, but I do want to say that I thought it was good, and I'm looking forward to the other Elvin fic you said you're working on.

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twiggyrocks2815 June 10 2012, 01:51:17 UTC
Oh, you have no idea how happy that makes me, because I'm really insecure about everything I write. Thank you!

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rabidmooses June 9 2012, 22:44:16 UTC
I lurve dis, lemme tell you.

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twiggyrocks2815 June 10 2012, 01:50:10 UTC
:D Thank you!

I've been reading your 7 Stages of Grief and I really like it

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lettherebeminho June 10 2012, 01:15:05 UTC
oh maaaaan this was heavy
to be honest, the Melissa de la Cruz quote led me in because i love love LOVE the Blue Bloods series you have no idea!!!
but back to the fic
this was really chilling
oh man
but it was good
because i love a nice dose of angst.

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twiggyrocks2815 June 10 2012, 01:47:50 UTC
I also love Blue Bloods! But I haven't read anything past the fourth book yet T_T because funds are low.

Thank you for reading!

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greasytree June 10 2012, 05:33:42 UTC
Oh My God, I thought for sure I was going to cry by the end of the story, But Eli saved me. Thank god for your precious being, Eli! Besides unrequited love AJ, no one loves Kevin as much as your pigeon self does T_T

On a side note, when I read the "why, why, why" section I started singing Before the Dawn in my head. :P

P.S. (this has nothing to do with the story because i like sharing my thoughts to the world) I caved into getting an asianfanfic account because I found a few infinite stories that I was having hard time keeping track of. Cindy, might kill me (just kidding....I think)

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twiggyrocks2815 June 10 2012, 06:24:23 UTC
This is why you are the greatest of all Lopezes. I love you <3

I was totally listening to Infinite today too... but I didn't even think about the why why when I was writing this. Shame on me

Lol, I was kinda thinking about getting an account there too, because I found like one or two okay U-KISS fics, but the quality was low... I suggest you just copypasta the ones you like (giving all proper credit, of course-- is that legal? immoral? D:)

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greasytree June 11 2012, 07:52:44 UTC
LOL, why thank you ;)

It's okay. Soon you will learn the ways of Infinite and become a master yourself in the art of relating everything back to Infinite, haha!

Yeah, a lot of stories there are just...eh. That could be because I'm so picky >_<

Oh well, I ended up getting an account anyways. I posted my Americano story there just to test the site out, and I was surprise there was an option to copy/paste-lock your story. It was really nice to see that the site gives writers the option to protect their work.

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twiggyrocks2815 June 12 2012, 00:24:54 UTC
That is a nice option to have.

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0_degrees_elvin June 10 2012, 06:48:52 UTC
Listened to "Take Me Away" while reading this and got chills.

... Sad.

Present tense was a good choice for this.

I really felt all of it.

Please don't be insecure about your writing.

Looking forward to the longer fic!

<3 Your friend. ^_^

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twiggyrocks2815 June 10 2012, 07:48:10 UTC
I love that song~

Thank you. It means a lot. Q_Q I have so many feelings right now. You're a sweet person.

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