Oh this is wonderful. Your Alex/Izzie actually make me interested in Alex/Izzie. And the stuff with Lexie/Mark is intriguing- I love how Addison is a momentary breath of fresh air- that's very true and unfortunate for Addison. They'd never work in the long term (no matter how much I wish they would!) but yes- this is just wonderful and well worth the wait. Fantastic work, really awesome. ♥
I loved the way you turned Derek and Meredith's conversation around into what was, really, avoidance, but ended up saying something true about Mark.
The Mark and Lexie scene was really powerful. I loved this line: Mark is standing there and he looks like hell, it satisfies her a minute, but deep down she just really wants to hold him and she can't, because I can absolutely see these thoughts going through Lexie's head. I also liked the fact that I wasn't quite sure what Mark was about to apologize for.
Finally, you got into Alex and Izzie's heads so beautifully; I really felt bad for Alex, though.
I loved the way you had Alex and Izzie talk, because it was the way they should have done it on the show. The Mer/Der was perfect in this. I'm glad you put it in. "Lexie I am so sorry." This chapter was amazing overall. Sorry for the lack of coherency.
Alex is in limbo, he wants nothing more than to forgive her and go back to how they were for the split second that they were perfect at their wedding
I love this line. It makes me ache for them because they were so perfect for just a second and I can see both of them yearning to have that back but not knowing how to get there.
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The Mark and Lexie scene was really powerful. I loved this line: Mark is standing there and he looks like hell, it satisfies her a minute, but deep down she just really wants to hold him and she can't, because I can absolutely see these thoughts going through Lexie's head. I also liked the fact that I wasn't quite sure what Mark was about to apologize for.
Finally, you got into Alex and Izzie's heads so beautifully; I really felt bad for Alex, though.
Great work.
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Lovely!
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The Mer/Der was perfect in this. I'm glad you put it in.
"Lexie I am so sorry." This chapter was amazing overall.
Sorry for the lack of coherency.
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I love this line. It makes me ache for them because they were so perfect for just a second and I can see both of them yearning to have that back but not knowing how to get there.
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