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[One-Shot] Train

Sep 02, 2012 23:51

Title: Train
Author: twentyeytako
Pairing(s): AKAME
Rating:PG13
Genre: Romance
Beta by: me. *yep.*
Disclaimer: i still think i'm one of Johnny's lost nieces or granddaughters and i will inherit the company when he retires. until that happens, i don't own any of them.
Summary: Jin and Kame got to know each other by sitting next to each other on the subway ( Read more... )

train

Comments 43

yukitsubute September 2 2012, 15:59:20 UTC

SPOT

yukitsubute September 4 2012, 04:50:18 UTC

Sorry for being late, I was busy. :)

Oh god, that was soooooo sweet. Kame is so incredible cute here. <3 And also Jin. ^^

It's so sweet how they meet everyday in train and slowly Jin and Kame are waiting for the other on each day. <3 That's so sweeeeeet....

Jin just noticed nobody's been listening to him when Kame's head fell on his shoulders. Jin just sighed and smiled as he let the younger man use him as a pillow.
I loved that scene sooo much. I can totally imagine how Kame falls asleep, snuggling up to the other. <3

Oh, Kame's confession is so heart breaking at the beginning. It's for sure hard for him to realize it and to tell Jin about it, even though everything is alright in the end.

Luckily Jin also falls for Kame, so they can start together. <3

Jin took Kame's hand and intertwined their fingers as they wait for the next train to come.
I loved the last sentence. <3 It's so full of feelings, even though nothing special happens, but just them holding hands is so cute and sweet. <3 ( ... )

twentyeytako September 4 2012, 10:07:58 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it, dear! thanks for requesting! :)

pinkporca September 2 2012, 16:45:31 UTC

So nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

twentyeytako September 3 2012, 01:24:48 UTC

thanks for reading! :)

amm_akame_love September 2 2012, 16:55:44 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
too sweet and cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
lovely!!!
loved it! *w*
I want that something like that would happen to me XD
thanks for sharing! :3

twentyeytako September 3 2012, 01:26:21 UTC

thanks for reading! :)

starg8fan_liz September 2 2012, 17:03:51 UTC

So sweet ^___^ wonderful fic♥♥♥♥♥♥

twentyeytako September 3 2012, 01:27:52 UTC

thanks for reading! :)

kazu_channie September 2 2012, 17:16:02 UTC

so sweet n cute~~~
n i grin like an idiot.lols..huhuhu
tanq 4 sharing..

twentyeytako September 3 2012, 01:28:35 UTC

thanks for reading! :)