Clogged Sinuses = Not Fun

[twenty_til_12]

I've been fighting a sinus infection off and on this week. Blargh. So, I'll post this and go sleep or something.

Title: Family: Ch. 2 [continuation of Ch. 1Inspiration/Music: "Nocturne in G Minor" by Chopin; "Out Here All Night" by Damone

Comments

[kenarbes]

Okay, I'm confused. Why would Sakura be sickened and run from him? Fai's left eye socket is not a gaping hole, he does have an eyelid that covers it. His right eye can't have been blown out or Fai would be dead.

After traveling with guys, some of who like to fight, and having an adventure, herself at the end of the Acid Tokyo storyline, Sakura isn't the squeemish sort.

On the other hand, yay for Chapter 2! One wonders how Kurogane's gonna react. It hasn't been established yet, in the manga, whether the bloodbond between Kurogana and Fai will let each man know if something happens to the other.

[twenty_til_12]

Ech, sorry! n.n;; You are very right. I knew that I wanted her to run, because it's a very important point (to be revealed why later), but I couldn't think of why she would run. She's a fighter and I didn't think she would leave if Fai told her to. And, as you have reminded me (xD), she isn't the squeemish sort anymore. I may need to rethink the ending of the chapter. Thank you so much for your help though! And thanks too for reading, sorry about the whole weird ending. :D

[ontogenesis]

Ooh, I'm excited to see the next chapter. I'm pleased that our group is exercising their intellectual capabilities (map-making and book stealing, yay!) The Fai / Sakura interaction was great, too: Sakura's disapproval of the theft, yet knowing not to push Fai too much, Fai's patience with her... but I was a little confused by Sakura's reaction too. Early in the story, perhaps she'd have such a reaction, but not post Acid!Tokyo.

I wonder if Fai's vampire powers will enable him to heal and escape.

[twenty_til_12]

Yeeeeaaah, the ending with Sakura running is confusing. I wholeheartedly agree. To summarize my reply to kenarbes, I needed a reason for her to run, 'cause it's important and all, but I couldn't really think of one (which was definetely not a good thing on my part, 'cause I shouldn't just post stuff I haven't thought through). So the ending is going to be redone and might be reposted later today. But thanks for reading! I really appreciate it. :3

[bolin]

ooooooooooooooooooooo o.o I'll really REALLY cannot wait for the next one...there is gonna be a next one r-right? *-* *puppy dog eyes*

[twenty_til_12]

xDD

Yeah, it'll be continuing. Thanks for your interest!