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twas_now

"infidelity", second draft

Nov 17, 2005 02:19

infidelity
second draft

on the main floor library where i was needed for
slapping muscle and fat into a business plan and
transforming math from cloud to rain, i was absent

( read the true full flesh back here )

school, sex, poetry, math, vanity

Comments 11

simonversusgod November 17 2005, 22:32:05 UTC

interesting.

twas_now November 17 2005, 23:44:52 UTC

worthy of the one king quarterly ?

meowie_wowie November 18 2005, 00:59:02 UTC

whattt the shizznizzle

twas_now November 18 2005, 21:18:49 UTC

aimes-tu?

twas_now November 28 2005, 08:44:39 UTC

that shoulda been "aimez-vous?"

but anyway, all is well, it's a metaphor. i am not into cheating. much.

simonversusgod November 18 2005, 17:58:28 UTC

yes. though i'd say most of your writing is...

twas_now November 28 2005, 08:45:44 UTC

so is the one king still on the go? i could put in a few things.

juiceteen November 19 2005, 06:52:36 UTC

hmmmmmmm, though i think you should warn her first and let her make the lost time up......
or you should maybe just break up with her when you find out she sucks in bed, cuz thats kind of essential isnt it?
that may be just my opinion......

twas_now November 22 2005, 09:24:09 UTC

i can say for a fact it is not a problem. sweet deal

simonversusgod November 19 2005, 07:08:19 UTC

what the hell does my hand taste like?

twas_now November 19 2005, 14:50:18 UTC

bunny nipples