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[#30] Friction

Jun 11, 2007 21:26

Title: Friction
Author: Red Wolf
Challenge #30: David Bowie song titles: Friday on my Mind
Rating: PG

( Friction )

challenge: bowie titles, character: gwen cooper

Comments 5

fajrdrako June 11 2007, 13:07:47 UTC

That sums up Gwen's dilemma. I wonder how - or if - this will ever be resolved.

redwolf June 11 2007, 13:13:23 UTC

Messily, painfully, probably both.

fajrdrako June 11 2007, 14:38:51 UTC

Painful for everyone, or just for Gwen?

misura June 15 2007, 12:42:20 UTC

I liked this - comparing and contrasting Gwen's life before and after in a mere hundred words. It might just be me, but I also liked the way the first half focused on the positive side of things; in her previous job, she had nice weekends (although the job was, possibly, a bit boring), in her present one, she has interesting work to do (but little to no free time). The second half showed the negative side of the present, leaving this drabble wondrously balanced and a very enjoyable read.

redwolf June 16 2007, 01:08:41 UTC

Many thanks. Nice to hear you enjoyed it.