Thanks for the lovely feedback. I enjoy writing Owen, which I think it's because he doesn't articulate his feelings so there is a lot of internal stuff to explore.
Oh wow. The first one is so evocative, I was all choked up all over again. Beautiful job. And in the second, well, yeah, I'm all about Gwen's girl power. I love how she has the best punch in the team!
Loved the look into Owen's thoughts in the first one, the contrast between Suzie's life and death. Gwen's reaction made me smile in the second. Jack could save himself a few problems if he just explained himself once in a while.
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Gwen just wouldn't be able to contain herself ;)
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There are a couple more titles which gave me ideas so there may be more to come.
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