Commentfic Fest!

[nancybrown]

Like the bonus round, this part of the fest goes as long as you want it to. I'll post some of the unfilled prompts from the original fest (I don't have the energy to go through them all, but if you do, feel free) you can post whatever prompts you'd like, and then people can fill them as commentfics, or post them as full-length stories to the comm

Comments

[bookwormsarah]

She didn't want to see him, she really didn't. He was responsible for the worst thing that could possibly happen, the thing she had always dreaded, losing her son. But now...a part of her was crying, would always be crying, and a little voice inside her just wanted her Dad

[nancybrown]

*flail*

She wanted to make sure he hadn't gone on with his life. She wanted to see he was ok. Contradictions. She was used to them when she thought about Jack.

I loved this bit so much. :D

[eldarwannabe]

Oh, this is amazing. This is one of the first stories I've seen that isn't just blind fury from Alice, and I love the way you portray her. I can't wait to see what happens next.

[pomkeygeekange]

Oh that was exactly what I was after, I can not wait for it to be continued.

[51stcenturyfox]

TAROT GIRL! YAYS!