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dorkii_simba June 26 2009, 00:06:58 UTC
spot

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emda June 28 2009, 03:08:14 UTC
then comment!

LOL

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dorkii_simba June 29 2009, 04:45:25 UTC
hmm...i have to reread again of your other chapters ;__;...mainly forgot what happened ;_____;. but omg omg omg *____* jaesu's scene was hot.

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emda June 28 2009, 03:09:14 UTC
:)

Changmin is needed there!!!!

Im already writing the last part!

Thanks for reading and commenting!!!!!!

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emda June 28 2009, 03:13:08 UTC
My bias showed a bit and well ninja-jaesu came on really handy!!!!!

hmmmm dont know why but I cant see Jae as a Death but Im glad his character here gives that vibes... you know with being the first one and all... LOL

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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naeve14 June 28 2009, 04:15:30 UTC
actually my dear friend, i've read this couple of times already, trying to grasp to the storyline and get back on track after the long update. as i thought, this chapter is as good as your previous one! *hugs*

so eventually Changmin would help Yunho trying to figure out what would be his next move. since Changmin seems to hold such knowledge even Jea and Yoochun doesn't. is Changmin, like Yunho, the chosen one as well? and what happened to Jae. i naively hope that he's not vanished just like that since it's going to be really really sad. Yoochun would be very devastated! and i think that one who actually witnessing all the things happened at the park must be Junsu?

I hope Yunho would act faster coz i have this funny feeling that the next target of the Death's wrath would be Yoochun. and since the next chapter would be the last chapter, i hope it would be longer coz.... well, it's last chapter! i want to know what future Yunchun have in store for them and i really hope that they would ended up together, as always *smiles*

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emda June 29 2009, 01:40:38 UTC
aaahhh *blushes* *hugs*

hmmm actually Yunho knows what he needs to do but he knows that he needs to understand whats happening to him to then do what is needed to be done. Changmin is just very smart.
Jae did vanish and you are getting the hints!!!!

Im just gonna remind you that this is a tragedy story and that it is characters death too and it wont end happy.

Already started the last part and I will try it to make it long!
Thanks for reading and commenting!

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