It's the end of the world as we know it

Aug 30, 2012 13:15


It's the end of the world as we know it

Written for spn_gen_bigbangminibang challenge.

Summary: It’s the end of the world. Really.
Teenchesters. Sam 15, Dean 19.
Rating: T
Words: 6910
Warnings: A few cursewords. Sad. Mention of suicide. 
Disclaimer: I wouldn’t mind having the Impala. Sadly, I don’t own anything.
Thank you to:

When I saw that annartism would be the artist to this ( Read more... )

gen, pre-series, fanfic, minibang, supernatural

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etrix August 30 2012, 12:35:03 UTC
I wasn't sure if you'd actually do it--end the world and kill everyone--but you did. Probably just as well, 'cause I can just see John pissing off just about everyone after a couple days. He may care, and the world ending might have softened him a touch, but he's argumentative down to his core and that would've come out again eventually.

Excellent job exploring all the different reactions of people.

And you're right; the art is gorgeous.

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tversan August 30 2012, 15:20:29 UTC
I know, I did it. It's terrible.
But yeah, I would not like to see John stuck in that room for too long, haha.

Yes,The art IS gorgeous. Such an amazing job!

Thank you for taking the time to comment!

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catsintheattic August 30 2012, 16:19:52 UTC
That was such a captivating and beautiful story. I enjoyed every scene of this slowly unfolding disaster, and each goodbye ripped out my heart: Bobby, the last hunt, the last time Sam read a book, the last time Dean had sex, the last time John tried to connect to his boys, the last pieces of sweets. I honestly didn't want it to end, because it was so clear how it would end. But on the other hand, I was almost glad when it ended, because it was almost unbearable to watch their world (and mine) deteriorate.

I loved the quiet dignity of all three Winchesters, John's silent support, Sam and Dean as brothers, bonding like always, and stronger together than apart. It broke my heart to see them go, and yet I felt that this was a way that did them justice.

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tversan August 30 2012, 16:29:30 UTC
Wow, I'm blushing over here. What a nice review.
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked it!

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antrazi August 30 2012, 16:52:44 UTC
There must be something wrong with me but I actually like a story where everybody died. Everybody as in really Everybody.

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tversan August 30 2012, 16:54:45 UTC
You're better than me. I'm the one who killed everyone.

Thank you so much for the review!

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elarra August 30 2012, 17:22:05 UTC
What I like about your story is that you're not afraid to go for the sad ending, instead of turning everything around and end with a happy last paragraph.

No, wait, what I like about your writing is that you write about the important and unimportant things in just the same way, so that you really show how the unimportant things are in fact the really important pieces that make up our lives.

Wait, that's not right, what I really like about your writing is that you somehow have all the characters voices down completely, and you manage to show the family bonds between them (including Bobby, who definitely is family) in a way that is ant once both understated and crystal clear.

Or is what I like about your writing the way you don't write to be funny, yet manage to make me laugh out loud every now and then?

No, I think what I like about your writing, or about this fic rather, is that you killed absolutely everybody. What's not to like about that?

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tversan August 30 2012, 17:43:54 UTC
You're so evil elarra .
And wonderul. Thanks for the awesome review (or...essay) <3

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monicawoe August 30 2012, 19:17:45 UTC
Wonderful read! They were all together - which is the best you can hope for in this scenario.

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tversan August 31 2012, 16:34:03 UTC
It is isn't it? I couldn't imagine them being apart. Thanks for the review <3

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