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tversan

Dinner in Suburbia

Dec 13, 2011 21:47

Title: Dinner in Suburbia
Rating: T
Characters: Lisa, Dean, and some neighbors who probably don't want to come back for dinner.
Words: 1814
Summary: Set between Season 5 and Season 6. The neighbors are coming for dinner, Dean is drunk.

Thanks a ton to my great Beta slaybelle69
Any mistakes left are totally my own.

Also, elarra - thank you.

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oh my the angst, fanfic, supernatural

Comments 8

borgmama1of5 December 14 2011, 00:45:10 UTC

Ouch!

But I love Lisa in this.

tversan December 14 2011, 19:59:17 UTC

Thanks a lot!

elarra December 14 2011, 18:28:00 UTC

I love this one. You have such a clean, understated style of writing, especially in the characterization of Lisa, it works really well to make the angst real an touching.

tversan December 14 2011, 20:00:05 UTC

=D Thank you. A lot. Really a lot =P

zara_zee December 14 2011, 22:54:15 UTC

Enjoyed this a lot. Nicely in character, and I particularly liked your depiction of Lisa...her reactions were very believable.

tversan December 16 2011, 13:49:12 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked Lisa in this =)

Dinner in Suburbia catsintheattic December 17 2011, 11:36:31 UTC

This was realistically painful, and I couldn't help to admire Lisa's loyalty to Dean.

Re: Dinner in Suburbia tversan December 17 2011, 11:43:04 UTC

Thank you! =D