#DESP: chapter 12: Jazz club

[dunedesert]

Title:   Jazz club

Author:   dunedesert / arwen01

Word Count:  3867

Rating: M

Summary: Damon takes Elena to a jazz club

Notes: AU/AH. Set in the Spring Break Universe. Part of a Round Robin challenge: Table of Contents.

Comments

[dreamssincerity]

Aww ^^

[scarlett2112]

Silvia & Leanne, This is so beautifully written. I loved how much effort he took to make the night absolutely perfect for her....Why did she have to bring "St Stefan" into it. Then she compounds the problem by comparing Damon to Stefan, like there is any comparison please lol (I'm with you, I loathe Stefan too) I love the way you get into their heads. I loved hearing their thoughts. The limo ride was very hot.
"There was something different in his stare this time. All the teasing was gone from his eyes
and she dreaded to get the deeper meaning behind their actions." I loved this. He loves her, she loves him too but It seems she's afraid to go there.
Loved the poem, loved how he came back to her lovingly removing her shoes then covering her up.. I am so glad she told him she was sorry. I'm glad he accepted that apology.
This was just beautiful.... Carol

[parnassides]

Gosh, this was wonderful :) Your descriptions are so vivid. The limo scene was, of course, very hot, but what I really loved was all the character development in this chapter. It was very emotional, and felt very real :) And the ending was absolutely lovely!

[aj81writing]

Beautiful poem.

[dutchess_sandra]

That whole part where Elena was getting turned on by just watching Damon drink his champagne was a very sexy introduction to that hot love making.

Stefan and his addiction and actions followed by the 'I'm not Stefan' part was a brilliant reference to the show.

The final part was sweet.

This was great, and I'm really curious about Leanne's chapter now, too :)