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#SP3: Chapter 7.5: Dolphins

Feb 28, 2012 01:10

Title: (Dolphins)
Author: (SweetWillowTree)
Word Count: (2062)
Rating: (M)
Trio: (Elena/Damon/Elijah)
Summary: (Immediately following chapter 7, Elijah stumbles upon Elena as she waits for Damon to fetch her clothes.)
Notes: AU/AH. Set in the Spring Break Universe. Part of a Round Robin challenge: TVD ENDLESS SPRING BREAK

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# elena gilbert, # elijah mikaelson, # damon salvatore, spring break universe 2012, endless spring break 2012

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parnassides February 28 2012, 18:01:32 UTC

Great chapter :) I love how possessive Damon is over Elena.

“You know, considering I'd never even thought of having a threesome a few days ago, I think I'm getting really good at them.” - absolutely brilliant line!

sweetwillowtree February 28 2012, 23:45:58 UTC

Haha! Glad you liked that line. And possessive Damon is so yummy :)

Yey! elizabeth85cec February 28 2012, 19:08:43 UTC

Well as always :D nothing short of perfect! You know I love everything you write so... I think that the threesome was perfect in the way that you worked it in, specially because it gave me ideas for mine :D

I ADORE Elijah so I'm glad that you used him and he was SO in character that it was awesome. I know in my chapter there was one part where I knew there was no way he'd say that, but I couldn't work it any other way.

Anyway, back to you, I loved it <3 So glad that you joined us :D

Re: Yey! sweetwillowtree February 28 2012, 23:54:17 UTC

It only makes sense that I inspired your DE3, since I was thinking about your Elijah as I was writing it.

Also, Elijah is always so difficult to write, isn't he? I'm glad you think he stayed in character :)

Amazing!! jenluvsvamps February 28 2012, 20:07:40 UTC

I *loved* the last comment Elena made. LMAO! I think she is! I also loved how you made a point of mentioning how 'invested' she was in Damon's pleasure. Even though Elijah was the one doing ehr, you made it totally a D&E fic right there.

That was brilliant!

This was a great piece. Hot, smutty and delicious.

Loved it!

Jen

Re: Amazing!! sweetwillowtree February 29 2012, 00:01:12 UTC

Argh! The whole time, I was like 'K, gotta focus on Elijah too. BUT IT'S DELENA! But Elijah's there too. BUT IT'S DELENA!" I have way too much of a one-track mind ;)

Glad you enjoyed it!

Delicious phyrfli February 28 2012, 23:26:21 UTC

As I stated on Twitter... LMAO Loved it, as always you write fantastic smut :)

I'm starting to wonder, when I comment to any of you guys through Twitter, if people think I'm nuts.. no one has asked me yet what the hell I'm ever talking about the convos are always one sided LMAO

Re: Delicious sweetwillowtree February 29 2012, 00:02:29 UTC

I think that we individually get it. Like when you say 'LOA 14 WAS AMAZING!', I totally understand. And agree ;)

jv4evr February 28 2012, 23:45:16 UTC

Wow, that was great.
The build up was great and I loved the fact that Damon was the one who started it and also that he pointed out that they had already been with his girlfriend and brother.
The smut was hot and well written. Though I think my favourite parts were Elena realising how much she actually cared about what Damon was feeling and at the end when Elena pointed out that she wouldn't have slept with Elijah cause Damon was keeping her satisfied. I also liked her comment about getting good at threesomes. Loved this chapter :)

sweetwillowtree February 29 2012, 00:17:15 UTC

Yay! Glad you enjoyed it!