[fic] A Long Day's Journey Into...

[fencer_x]

Title: A Long Day's Journey Into...
Author: fencer_x
Pairing: Nataraja/Pasupata
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Nataraja and Pasupata take a trip. Along the way, there are two rooms, two beds, a smelly inn--and lots of awkwardness :D
Notes: Because I just couldn't help myself :P Another fic in this universe~

Comments

[analineblue]

Oh, the kissing! ;__; And the beyond awkward talking about it afterward~ ^_________^ Perfect, really. I don't know, it just all felt really right for them. <333 I'm glad you got over the whole not being able to write them together like that...thing. ^_~ Because this was just really nice, and sweet and perfect and I want MORE. :D :D :D

And hmm, a month of traveling together... That seems like it could definitely lend itself to more, right?? XD

[innusiq]

You literally kill me when you post things like this in the hours leading into me having to leave for work. 1. because I am usually sleeping when you actually post and 2. by the time I realize you have posted something... I HAVE TO LEAVE FOR WORK!!!!! *sigh*

Oh, but it was so worth the wait... okay, well, I didn't really wait too long seeing as I copied and pasted it to a notepad on my iPod and read it during lunch and what not ;) Ah, glorious things iPods :D

I didn't think there was any way I could be more head over heels for these characters... but then I watched Mahamode and you posted another fic in a series of fics, and I am all grins and my heart is just as clenched as these two. This is all so very gooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!

I've always got a favorite moment/line/what-have-you, and this is it:

He brushed a tongue against Nataraja's, who in response pressed in harder, eyes squeezed shut as he ran his tongue along the inside of Pasupata's mouth as if in fear that opening them would break the spell.I think this describes

[tonomurajiro]

"Good." He nodded, as if sealing it all away. "Right, so. This--thing."

Pasupata gestured between them. "...This thing?"

A nod. "What is it?"

"...It needs a name?"

Nataraja frowned, flushing. He really preferred the fun part of this thing to the awkward conversing part of it. "I...doesn't it?"

IDK. I just find that part cute *___________________*

MOAR!!!