[Fic] Even

[analineblue]

Title:  Even
Author: analine
Pairing: Nataraja/Pasupata (Tuti and Nagayan's Maharaja Mode counterparts ^_~)
Warnings: None, completely worksafe
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2000
Summary: Pasupata wants to make Nataraja understand.  
Notes: My take on why Pasupata did what he did the night Nataraja saved him from the fire. It takes place a few days

Comments

[fencer_x]

AT LAST! The NataPasu train is leaving the station~ :D

It was really refreshing to finally read another take on them, and yet it still...was completely them *___* I love the inevitable little snippy comments and fighting and all that has to come before they can be friends again, but then some of the little things just...sent me over the moon ;_;

"I didn't want you to leave me there, so I did what I had to do. That's it, okay? I'm just as bad as you. So you can stop feeling bad for yourself now and just... be mad at me instead, or something."

It's funny, because I feel like you're supposed to feel sorry more for Nataraja in the show, but reading this made me realize that I really feel bad more for Pasupata I guess? ;_;

And sdiufhsidfs the eye comments XD And Nataraja never having noticed before and sdiufhsidfs Jamiiiieeeee. Especially the bit at the end with this:

"So you really meant that about my eyes?" Pasupata says eventually, after the light from the lamp has all but faded away to nothing, leaving them in relative darkness

[analineblue]

I'm SO glad you liked this, and so glad too that it felt like them~ ^___^ Honestly this came almost too easily, so I was worried, lol. I think I somehow managed to write this without dealing with anything Indian at all too, so... BONUS? :P Or maybe not, it could probably stand to have more of those details for authenticity...and stuff. :P

[innusiq]

Who's happy there is a second author writing this pairing *points to self* AMEN! I am soooooo reading that refresher and watching MahaMode this weekend!

It's kind of a understatement for me to say "I really liked this." Again, you and fencer_x are definitely setting the bar high for my first viewing on this show. Very high, but I fully expect Tuti and Takashi to deliver, there is no doubt in my mind regarding that.

I love this tension... unresolved tension that is... and while there was some small resolution given here, there is still more tension just left there, hanging... enticing us to want to read more of these two.

I hope to read more!

[analineblue]

Oh they'll deliver, don't worry. XDDD I can't wait until you watch the show and finally...see them. XDDD Because then, hopefully we'll have a third writer for this pairing?? *nudges* :D

I'm really glad you liked this though. <3 And I really hope I'm able to write more! ^_^

[tonomurajiro]

I'm melting as they hold hands *______________*

I can't wait to watch it *______*

[analineblue]

I can't wait for you to watch it too! XDD

And thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. :)