[Fic] Unravel

[analineblue]

Title: Unravel
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None. Worksafe.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,451
Summary: Tuti watches Nagayan on the dance floor.
Notes: I started writing this while watching Nagayan's Live DVD, because I wanted to write something about Tuti watching him dance. At first it was just going to be a short, unrequited!Tuti

Comments

[de_oxygenated]

This was absolutely gorgeous! Also very sad, but so silently optimistic.

Well, as long as the attraction to them is still alive, I say they have a chance together, still. I really feel for Tuti here... ): One day! One day! Nagayan will stumble out of the cab with you!

[analineblue]

*nodnod* Yes! He definitely will. :D In fact, it was hard for me to end this with that NOT happening, because even when I decide that I want to explore another side of them, in the end, it's just...hard for me not to write a happy ending!

Anyway~ Thank you. <3

[tonomurajiro]

Okay, now this is the 'Suki da yo' fic you told the other day, right? Because it seems like it is even though the POV is reversed.

But this is beautifully sad (er... sadly beautiful? I don't know what I'm talking about XDD;;). Tragic and ironic.

*wipes tears*

thank you for writing this!! *glomps*

[analineblue]

Yep, this is the 'Suki da yo' fic. XD It didn't start out that way, but then the mood of that song kind of crept into my brain as I was writing this. That's an interesting thought too, about the POV being reversed. I think I was sort of thinking of it more like... maybe the POV is mutual in the song, and that even though we're seeing this through Tuti's perspective, Nagayan is feeling exactly the same way? Maybe? I don't know... It was more of a mood thing than anything else. That song has such an undercurrent of emotions to it... I think that's what was in my mind, writing this. [/rambling] XD;;;

I'm really glad you liked it though~ ♥

[tonomurajiro]

*nods nods* I think Nagayan is feeling the same way. That's why they're still agreeing to go out? Because despite the bitterness of their situation, there's this little something between them that they don't want to let go? XDD;; Do I read too much into this?

[analineblue]

Do I read too much into this? Nope, not at all. That's exactly how I was thinking about it. <3