[Fic] Celebration

[analineblue]

Title: Celebration
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None, worksafe
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,870
Summary: Tuti and Nagayan find an interesting way to celebrate their anniversary.
Notes: I completely fail at completing things on time it seems, but... Well, June 30th wasn't SO long ago, right? >_> Plus, I just realized that this kind of

Comments

[scratchbook]

Analine... as always, so beautifully written ;___; Everything in this fic is so belieavable that I wouldn't be surprised if this was how they spent their June 30th morning. I love their conversation and the detail about the sunlight. When Tuti is speaking quietly while sitting on the floor and enjoying the same sunlight Takashi does, the intimacy feels so real that for a while there I feel as if I'm intruding on their private moment... *_____* And I also love the idea that Takashi can vividly picture Tuti going through his morning. It portrays perfectly how close they are if he even knows when and how Tuti wipes the sweat off the corner of his forehead... Absolutely beautiful...

I know I'm being greedy, but more, please? ^^ Thank you for writing and posting this lovely piece. Now, would you excuse me while I go sit at the corner and think about how that sunlight dances on their naked thighs...? Um.

[analineblue]

*__* Naked thighs... >_> Dammit~ Now you've made my mind wander, when I was going to say something about how much I love comments like this that really make me think about things I wasn't even thinking about when I was writing, but now all I can think about is Nagayan naked thighs. XD

But seriously, thank you. ^__^ I honestly hadn't even thought about the fact that it was sort of like they were enjoying the same sunlight there, and so.. Yes. Thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think. ♥

[scratchbook]

Yeaah... those thighs... they're banned in several states and small, religious countries.... *_____*

Writing a comment to your fic is the least I can do, you know. Because asking you (or at least, your Tuti) to marry me probably isn't the appropriate thing to do...XDDD. If that's what it takes for you to keep on writing, then by Ueshima, I will write these comments! >:)

[analineblue]

*laughs* XDD Small, religious countries really wouldn't know what to do with those thighs, that's for sure. ^_~

(I have no idea why I'm replying so late, btw... @_@)

But... My Tuti told me to tell you that sadly, he's taken. :D And your comments really do inspire me a lot, so... ♥

[enako_a]

Total and utter love, once again. Beautifully written ._. I can totally picture them. Great

[analineblue]

Thank you~ I'm glad you liked it. ^_____^

[doumyoujitsukas]

Very, very nice. ^^

Absolutely amazing, as usual.

[analineblue]

Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it. XD

[manikineko]

I am so happy now that I´ve read this fic :) You are an awesome writer and I wish I could write like you. Every word you wrote seems like the one and only word to fit for what you wanted to express. I hope you understand my crappy English ^_^ And although there is not that much action it is a very lively story. You spent much effort into describing the details and it creates a really good mood. I could almost feel the sun and morning air although here it is raining and evening. I can feel how much you love those two and I love them how you write them (again a crappy sentence ^_-)

Thank you! :)

[analineblue]

It makes me really, really happy that this felt so real to you. ♥ Sometimes I feel like my fics are getting to be more and more about the mood, and less about the action, so... I'm really glad that the mood here was a good one. ^_^

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting - I really appreciate it. ^___^

(And your English isn't crappy at all - don't worry so much. ^_^)

[manikineko]

*looks at scratchbook´s comment* Let´s merry analine´s Tuti together XD

Back to topic: I think it shows that you thought a lot about the mental level of their relationship if your fics are focusing more and more on the mood. It´s a good thing imo, because I don´t know them for that long and I´ve learned the most about the two of them out of fanfictions like yours. I haven´t even read a bio of any of them °_°

I will always comment your amazing stories, can´t wait for the next one. And I am excited like a fangirl when I am able to talk to you about those things in such an enthusiastic way ^_^ *wants to add you to her friends*

[analineblue]

Let´s merry analine´s Tuti together XD - *Nagayan glares at you both* XDDD

That makes me really, really hope I'm not too far off with characterizing them! XD;;; But I definitely know what you mean. It's great when you're able to really feel like you can get to know a character or a person through a fic, and so... It makes me happy that the way I write them feels so realistic. XD

I'm really happy to talk to you about things like this too. XD And if you hadn't added me, I was totally going to add you, so... \^o^/ Yay~ ♥

[hibimaosuki]

♥♥♥♥♥♥

[analineblue]

*hugs* I love those big read hearts. :D

[analineblue]

Um. >_> *RED. Yes. :P