Malaise

[turtleclouds]

Title: Malaise
Pairing: broken!KyuSung (Kyuhyun x Yesung), ninja!Yesica (Yesung x Jessica) 
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst, dystopia!AU
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the people mentioned in this. Unfortunately. 
Summary: Love is a disease (not to mention illegal) and they have a cure for it.

10 Settings Challenge: #7 - Mountains

Comments

[lalilula]

spot

[lalilula]

why did you have to make it angst?! now I'm crying like a baby and I have to hide my face from my little sister so she won't laugh at me.
seriously, this is beautiful yet heart-breaking at the same time ;-;

[turtleclouds]

Aww I'm sorry.... :(
At least there's a bonus one without angst? Heh ^^

Thanks for reading & commenting!

[emo_what97]

... I honestly can't describe how much depth you put into this. I especially love the concept you made her, making love into a form of a disease.

What really got to me was the last line. And as much as I want to knock some sense into Jongwoon and make him go back to Kyuhyun, somehow I feel it wouldn't have been right, with society against them.

<3

[turtleclouds]

Aw I'm glad you liked it ^^

I agree with you - it wouldn't have been right since society would never have let them go. Jongwoon was being rational and smart about their futures *nods*

Thanks so much for reading & commenting! :)

[denden143]

SPOT!!! Angst?? NANA!!!

[turtleclouds]

Haha I've been...writing too much fluff lately. Needed to change it up a bit :)

[denden143]

T.T

Why do you have to break up my precious OTP??? WHY???

Anyway, the story is good,,interesting and unique~ (Love as a disease is really something new,,though for the bitter ones Im sure they agree :D)

This is cruel,,and Kyuhyun's right, no one's right for Jongwoon except him..only him!! Sadly they can't be together T.T and that's so sad :((

I want fluff Nana!! You better give me some!! You know how much I hate angst >.<
Still,,beautiful story~ (Is this the last? Won't you give us a bonus? xDD)

[turtleclouds]

Yeah...at least no more character deaths, right? *tries to be positive*
The idea stuck with me for quite a while... it was practically yelling at me to write it down.

Heh I have a love/hate relationship with angst :P
Yeah :( But...at least they had a year together :):) Filled with beautiful memories.

Haha I might just have some planned :)
Shh! The bonus is supposed to be a surprise. But yeah...there's a bonus coming ;)

<3 you Den!

[nytslyer03]

angst but who cares?
nana i love this.. although love is a disease here.
ouch for kyu and his love for jongwoon and vice versa. the surgery didn't cure yesung because he still love kyu. such a waste of time. there's no cure for love except time. *sigh*

very well written as usual.
love this..

more please!!! more!!!!

[turtleclouds]

Hi Ron! :D
Yeah...it's a bit of a depressing note to finish this 10 settings challenge (but I have something good planned as a bonus! so hopefully that'll make up for this)

Totally agree with you about time being the only cure. Useless surgeries are useless. They can't stop the heart from wanting.

Thanks for the lovely comment ^^
MORE FROM YOU AS WELL PLEASE! :D:D

[nytslyer03]

how about placing all of those settings in a VERY long oneshot? that would be amazing... but of course it's a wishful thinking... hehehe...

surgeries are for physical pain only not for emotional scars. hehehe.. say no to surgeries!! for this fic only

an amazing fic deserves a comment. :))

[turtleclouds]

Haha that would be insane! The settings vary far too much :P
But you know what? YOU should give it a go. I'm sure the plot would be really interesting... haha xD

Aww you're too sweet Ron <3

[rhenny]

spot!!

I can't read angst yet because I'm going to write fluff!!

but I'll still read this because Nana made this~

[turtleclouds]

Fluff?! I LOVE FLUFF <3
You better make it extra fluffy then, since YeKyu is separated in this :(

AHH I'm excited for the fluff now :D:D:D