[Kyusung] Petrichor

[turtleclouds]

Title: Petrichor
Pairing: Kyusung [Kyuhyun x Yesung]
Rating:  R (Language, hints of smut)
Length: Oneshot
Genre: Angst (with a happy ending)
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, just the plot.
Summary: Misunderstandings, heartache and a lot of rain.

10 Settings Challenge: #4 - In the Rain

Comments

[veronica1975]

Beautiful...thaks for made it and sharing...is like the real relations, always one of teh part think like Kyu...sad!!! but i love this story thanks

[turtleclouds]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! :)
Thanks for your lovely comment <3

[niayesungie]

i find it's funny how suddenly popular Yewon is. though i'm really glad (Yewon is my OTP) but i do know some fans of other OTPs of Yesung aren't happy with all the Yewon thingy (while i'm exploding happily ^^). i understand them because we each have our own preferences, which one is suited Yesung best or which one loves Yesung most...
such a good idea for a Kyusung fic. i myself had in mind some jealousy of Kibum but i haven't write anything yet, so... i don't know (it's hard to write these days).
& btw i love your writing style. you're descriptive, i think, but not boring! and emotionally touched my heart *sobs*

[turtleclouds]

Yeah, must be from all those Yewon moments during SS4 :D
I've always loved the two together (although ultimately I ship Kyusung ^^). I don't know really...OTP wars seem quite futile, since we can't really decide who each member truly belong with since only the members themselves can do that. We can only make them be together in our fanfics, and imagine what goes on behind closed doors.

Thanks for all the praise! I'm glad you like my writing style :)

[niayesungie]

i think your word "futile"is just correct. i know (and hope) that Yesung is really straight. idk about Siwon :p and by that we can assume that shipping any yaoi otp is useless right? and we could never know about what's goin' on behind their doors indeed. we know that yesung himself is a very different person in real life and by that, i assume, nothing we could ever guess right. about otps, is the artist himself who could feel who's his soulmate in the band, not the fans. fans should know that to stop fanwar :( poor Clouds, even some other Yesung otp's shipper are like holding a grudge to us Yewon shipper. people just couldn't take it easy, and it stressed me out. Clouds supposed to be friends, not like this :(

[turtleclouds]

I'm with you on Yesung being straight haha! I'm sure he is, but he has extreme skinship with the others for fanservice, and also because he's just so comfortable with everyone. Have you seen him on miracle for you talking about yewook fanfics? :P

Yep, I think all ELFs and *especially* Clouds should realize that everyone has different views about their biases and OTPs, but we still love Super Junior dearly (which is what truly counts)

[lalilula]

another angst? =( but, well, it has a happy ending, so I think it's ok.
I think I can understand Kyuhyun's insecurity, kind of.
and you have described their magical nights magically. I like it ♥

[turtleclouds]

Haha I did try to write a fluff for this one (since everyone loves those), but it was too tempting with the whole rainy scene that I pictured :P
+ the music in the background was screaming out "WRITE ANGST!"

Yeah I think the insecurity exists for a lot of couples :( If only it didn't exist.
Hehe I suck at writing smut, or I would've gotten into all the dirty details.

Thanks for the comment! <3 for constantly reading my fics! :)

[denden143]

SPOT!! will read tomorrow~

[denden143]

Late comment sorry~

Petrichor,,it sounds nice you know...and you added another word to my vocabulary..xDD!!

Oh angst...but its a good kind of angst...sort of bitter-sweet. Bitter opening but sweet ending ♥ It made me sad though :(( Kyuhyun's pain and negativity is contagious...

Love this Nana!! But don't be angry if I say the museum is still my favorite :)

Goodluck with the remaining 5? Is it 5 more? xDD!! I lost track,,you're so fast in writing :))

[turtleclouds]

Hi Den! :D
It's okay, we're all quite busy :P

Aw don't be affected! :(
The main thing is overcoming differences and misunderstandings, which they did :D

Why would I be angry? :) Hehe. I'm glad you liked the other so much ^_^

Yup 5 more.
Going to be on a semi-hiatus since these two weeks are going to be exam week :(

[denden143]

Yeah...at least they patched things up so i should be happy~

Its just that its really beautiful,,and Im such a big fan of fluffs you know that...but this is also beautiful and I also love this <3!!

Oh...good luck with your exam then~
Hwaiting Nana!!

[phoenix_soar]

It was beautiful in its ambiguity, to be honest. Perfectly understandable and absolutely heartfelt and touching. You have such a way with describing a character's emotions; I could really feel Kyuhyun's hurt and insecurity while reading this.

There will always be one person in a couple that will doubt the other's love, I think. Sad, but mostly true and I love how you handled that situation. When Kyuhyun just snapped. The feelings were realistic and human :)

Rain is a lovely theme and I my favourite thing about it is how versatile it can be. It can be used as a mood setting for heart break or to create a romantic atmosphere for love. I think you sort of succeeded in combining all that here, with how the pouring rain slowed down to a shower and then finally stopped, with each little improvement in their relationship. Stunning use of pathetic fallacy!

You have made petrichor my new favourite word xD

I love your one-shots so much. You're such a talented writer, Nana!

[turtleclouds]

Hi Arvy! :D

Yeah I fell in love with the word petrichor :P One of my friends insist that it's a horrible word, but I think it's absolutely beautiful. How else do you describe such a specific smell?

And it sucks being the one who's insecure in the relationship, but I totally agree with you on how there's always one person who's like that within a couple. If only there wasn't unrequited and conditional love.

I'm glad my idea worked out with the whole pathetic fallacy! I'm with you about the versatility of it - I think that's why there's been quite a few fics lately that play around the idea of rain.

Aww, thanks so much dear!
One-shots are my thing ^_^ I don't think I can handle writing chaptered fanfics (I like immediate resolutions), so I'll leave the hardcore writing up to authors like you :P

Anyways, lots of love for the (really nice) comment! :D