Under the Blue Umbrella
Title: Under the Blue Umbrella
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: HyukChul (Eunhyuk x Heechul)
Rating:PG-13 (language, mild sexual content?)
Genres: Romance, Angst
Summary: Heechul gave up waiting for him a long time ago. But somehow the person Heechul waited for turns out to have been by his side all along.
For phoenix_soar. Not entirely sure why.
( Hyukjae runs whenever Heechul is within two meters of him, and Heechul tries to chase him. But lately, sometimes when Hyukjae is in a good mood, he would let Heechul catch him. )
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GODDAMMIT WOMAN I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT
I KNEW YOU WERE WRITING HYUKCHUL I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW I KNEW I FREAKING KNEW IT.
I HATE YOU SO MUCH HERE HAVE MY HEART OR SOMETHING
CRYING
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Anxious!Nana...
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LIFE. WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO TELL ME. D':
should I just give up and marry you or something OTL
AND YOU SHOULD KNOW. I WAS DEAD LAST NIGHT. I SLEPT AT LIKE 3.30 AM. I WAS INCOHERENT. AND I DIED. AND IT IS ALL YOUR FAULT. BECAUSE YOU WROTE ME HYUKCHUL. AND NOT JUST ANY HYUKCHUL, BUT EPIC HYUKCHUL. THAT WAS ANGST. AND FULL OF EMOTION. AND NOT AU. ACTUAL CANON. NANA KILLED ARVY. AND ARVY REGRETS NOTHING.
On to the akshual commento
You know what a thing I have for angst, and the beginning was just beautiful. The cold winter of Christmas Eve really adds to the loneliness and bittersweetness of the scene where Heechul just keeps on waiting for a stranger he doesn't even remember. I loved the memory of how they met. Hyukjae just so wouldsensing Hyukjae - like his smell and feel - rather than seeing him. All ( ... )
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He presses Hyukjae against the closest wall and nuzzles his neck
scrapes his teeth gently on Hyukjae’s collarbone, and presses sweet kisses
The sounds that Hyukjae make shoot straight to his loins
... why must you do this, why do you hurt me in this way
YOU OUGHT TO BE THE ONE WRITING SMUT NANA ;A;
BAMF!Ryewook. Unf. Can own Heechul anytime he chooses to xD /APPROVAL/
HYUKCHUL YOU IDIOTS >.> Figures it'd take an intermediary person for one to know the other is in love with him. Bah.
The final scene ... /crying/
OMG WHERE DO I START
Drunk!Heechul confessed and Sober!Heechul doesn't remember ughhh but yes yes yes I love you for making Hyuk take the initiative at last. Dragging Heechul out and confronting him about the confessions sobs
And Hyukjae ... I'm sorry to say, but I totally empathize with him. I know it's not right to have such low self-esteem, but I empathise. This line: But you…look like you. And I look…like me. OMG ARVY'S LIFESTORY OR WHAT. /huggles Hyukjae/ You're beautiful, bb ( ... )
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hyukchul is marvelous.
waaahhhhh.
/this is why I don't usually comment. But I thought the least I should do is to let you know that I love this. Ok, happy 2013!
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Hahaha your comment is still appreciated! Thanks for letting me know that you love this, it means a lot to me :)
Happy new year! I hope your 2013 is off to a great start!
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And yes, opposites attract definitely works for HyukChul xD
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You know, I only read KyuSung BUT I felt like I had to read this because you wrote it and it's HyukChul. And I ship HyukChul (I started to seriously love it when Heechul left OTL why am I like that), and I missed those HyukChul feels you have no idea ;~; it was just...perfect.
"so I hope it doesn’t read as YeKyu in the guise of HyukChul" OMG don't worry no, not at all. It wasn't OOC and the feeling was so much different from your KyuSung fics. IT'S HYUKCHUL ♥
Hyukjae is so adorable OMG and Heechul...aaw, I just loved his character. And Ryeowook hahaha like I always say in french : il est la voix de la sagesse.
I'm still wondering why I'm sobbing over a HyukChul fic (I think it's my first Oo) because I thought I could only be like this about KyuSung. Well done, Nana :D t'es la meilleure ♥
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Aww I'm so touched that you read it simply because I wrote it :) I don't usually actively look for HyukChul stuff since none of KRY are in this OTP (and you know what a soft spot I have for KRY...), but I'm glad Arvy kinda shoved this OTP into my face.
And I'm sure it's far from perfect, but I'm glad you think so ;-;
Hahaha. I'm glad! I was so worried when I was writing. I even did some more research about these two xD
Ryeowook, I find, tends to be the middle man in fics when it comes to making people realize their love for each other. I think I should write a MinWook so that Wookie can get some love too...
Awwwhhs. Nah, you're the best!
I love you~ Sorry I haven't been talking to you as often this holiday. Promise I'll make it up to you ♥
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but I like how in this fic you made their different personalties the attraction for them *_* its nice .
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