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turlough January 23 2011, 16:42:35 UTC
This is such a nice story! Great Bob characterisation and his and Patrick's friendship were so sweet in all its mutual grumpiness :-) I really like how you wrote the Killjoys and the way they're opening up to Bob, and I love the glimpses we get into how other people are living in the zones. But the attack on the family camp was completely heartbreaking. I'd tears in my eyes while I read that!

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turps33 January 29 2011, 17:45:16 UTC
I'm glad you mentioned Patrick, because I sometimes thought I'd written him too unsympathetic, while it was more he was just involved with what he was doing.

The family camp. I didn't like destroying that :(

Thank you!

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t_vo0810 January 23 2011, 19:00:10 UTC
This was perfection. just perfection. I have missed having Bob in MCR fic and this was like a salve on my heart. I love this universe. I just wanna pitch a tent and set up camp and revel in it for a long while. i hope you write prequels and sequels and one-shot ditties in this 'verse for as long as it continues to inspire. definitely one that's getting mem'd. like the rest of your fics, actually. now that i think of it. I guess that means i should friend you so I don't miss a single one, then? if that's ok with you.

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turps33 January 26 2011, 22:46:24 UTC
Your comment is amazing. Thank you!

I really enjoyed writing this, and imagining how Bob could fit into the world was fun. What role he'd play, how he'd meet the killjoys, all of it. So I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

Of course it's okay to friend ♥

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toucanpie January 23 2011, 20:49:03 UTC
This was just what I needed to read today, awesome awesome group fic with lovely build-up. They're the best when they're all together and you do it to perfection here. The leaning on each other and the bickering with each other, and the sleeping with each other (unf) - everything. I loved it right from the beginning, when Mikey was the tetchy reluctant patient (so good ahahaha), all the way up to the end when they came and got Bob ♥ ♥

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turps33 January 26 2011, 22:55:24 UTC
I have to admit, I love the beginning part with Mikey the tetchy patient. Or as I called them during the writing process, surly Mikey and grumpy Bob *g*

But I do love group stuff so much, so I'm glad you liked that.

Thank you for such a lovely comment <3

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listedheart January 24 2011, 00:04:17 UTC
This is so great! Everyone's part in it was absolutely perfect, and I love all their interactions and dynamics. Amazing. ♥____♥

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turps33 January 26 2011, 22:56:22 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you!

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turps33 January 29 2011, 17:22:23 UTC
It didn't take me long to start thinking how Bob would fit into the killjoys world. I can't even remember why him being a mechanic came to mind, but once it did I couldn't stop thinking about it, and this story happened.

I'm really glad that you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to let me know.

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