I'm so glad you mentioned the time it took Bob to ease into the group, because I didn't want it to be too fast. Though it was tempting to just throw him in there asap.
Their characterizations were smooth and believable and them being there added to bulidling the intrict universe you were weaving
It is very obviously not only about the sex between them and you can really see how they love each other, but the sex scene between them all was incredible.
Two things. First. Yes, that's what I was going for, that they do love each other, so I'm thrilled that you got that. Second, I'm so pleased you thought the sex was good. It's what I think I'm weakest at writing, so that's a big relief.
Bob's pink jeep! I love that detail, which may be egotistical to say in my own story, but I do.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed, and that you take the time to leave such amazing comments. I appreciate it so m uch.
You already know how much I love this, but its worth repeating.
I love this! The way you've woven Bob, Patrick and all the bandom ladies so seamlessly into the Killjoys 'verse is just superb. I love the pacing of the story with the slow burn from hostility into friendship into something more. And the juxtaposition of the action scenes with the moments of quiet domesticity works so well and gives a wonderfully rounded view of their world. I also love the humour and the little in-jokes, plus the sex is hot!
Mostly, though, I love Bob's hot neon pink jeep *g*
Your comment makes me blush, and beam happily at the screen.
Bob's Jeep is the star of the show really. It's why I had a moment of considering writing in the verse for BBB, just so I'd have a minuscule chance of getting hot neon pink jeep art *g*
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I'm so glad you mentioned the time it took Bob to ease into the group, because I didn't want it to be too fast. Though it was tempting to just throw him in there asap.
Their characterizations were smooth and believable and them being there added to bulidling the intrict universe you were weaving
You say the most lovely things.
Also, the sex was hot like burning. Just saying.
*beams at you* Thank you!
For this whole comment. It was lovely to read ♥
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You had me chewing on my nails in the family camp battle. OMG so terrifying!
The smutty bits? Totally hot and well done. I knew you were going to kick ass.
And speaking of: THIS is kick-ass. So very worth the wait, Terri. UGH! \o/
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I'm really glad that you liked it. Thank you for all your support all the way through <3
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Your worldbuilding, your Bob voice, it's fabulous. I love it. :)
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Thank you so much ♥
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It is very obviously not only about the sex between them and you can really see how they love each other, but the sex scene between them all was incredible.
Two things. First. Yes, that's what I was going for, that they do love each other, so I'm thrilled that you got that. Second, I'm so pleased you thought the sex was good. It's what I think I'm weakest at writing, so that's a big relief.
Bob's pink jeep! I love that detail, which may be egotistical to say in my own story, but I do.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed, and that you take the time to leave such amazing comments. I appreciate it so m uch.
I hope your school work is going well.
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I love this! The way you've woven Bob, Patrick and all the bandom ladies so seamlessly into the Killjoys 'verse is just superb. I love the pacing of the story with the slow burn from hostility into friendship into something more. And the juxtaposition of the action scenes with the moments of quiet domesticity works so well and gives a wonderfully rounded view of their world. I also love the humour and the little in-jokes, plus the sex is hot!
Mostly, though, I love Bob's hot neon pink jeep *g*
♥
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Your comment makes me blush, and beam happily at the screen.
Bob's Jeep is the star of the show really. It's why I had a moment of considering writing in the verse for BBB, just so I'd have a minuscule chance of getting hot neon pink jeep art *g*
Thank you!
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