Comments | turps33: Mr. Bob 3/3

turps33

Mr. Bob 3/3

Oct 06, 2010 15:23

( Part 3 )

Comments 58

myorangecrush October 6 2010, 21:20:44 UTC

I miss Bob but I enjoyed this :)

there's a mistake in this paragraph as well.

It turns out that Ray knows Gerard perfectly. Inside Frank and Jamia are watching as Gerard paces the corridor, and when Bob walks into view Gerard’s face lights up, before Gerard he scowls, as if he's remembering he's supposed to be angry. "I meant that, and if you ever say anything like that about Mikey again you'll get another punch. But I hope you're okay.

turps33 October 6 2010, 21:34:07 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed :)

Thanks for the heads up. I'll go and fix that now.

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turps33 October 7 2010, 06:31:44 UTC

Honestly, it started off as fluff, and then they both got issues and fixing those issues became complicated and more issues arrived. At times it was a huge struggle to keep the balance between that and the fact it is a story about kids and being a pre school teacher.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed them all, and your comment about Ray made me laugh. I researched opening private schools and brave and crazy sums it up.

As someone who's sat through my fair share of shambolic school shows I enjoyed thinking about the kids performing, and how it would sound terrible. But that's exactly how a show for kids that young has to sound imo. Then I teared up when Mikey clapped, because I'm lame.

Thank you so much ♥

bitterlotus October 7 2010, 01:07:22 UTC

Aw, this was lovely and I adored it. Bob would be an awesome teacher I bet. <3

turps33 October 7 2010, 06:27:21 UTC

I think he would too. He's gruff sure, but also funny and smiley when he wants.

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for letting me know ♥

monkey_pie October 7 2010, 04:13:43 UTC

you've made me a bob/mikey convert. thanks for this!

turps33 October 7 2010, 06:26:21 UTC

I like the Bob/Mikey pairing, I bet they'd have fun, and look great together /shallow moment.

You're welcome, thank you for the comment.

lstinhpfdm October 7 2010, 05:43:12 UTC

Bob as a preschool teacher!! Just the idea is made of win. I'm laughing so hard about the whole idea. This story is wonderful. The mistakes these boys make feel so natural. Thanks for writing. It's been the best part of a not so great day.

turps33 October 7 2010, 06:25:20 UTC

As soon as I saw the prompt I knew I wanted to claim it. I didn't expect it to take so long to finish though /o\

I'm very glad you enjoyed, and that it helped cheer up your bad day ♥