fic - the faithful and the brave : 41 [novella]

Aug 30, 2018 23:14

Title:  The Faithful and the Brave
Part:  41

The Faithful and the Brave - Part 41 )

fic_novella, gw, fic_novella_f&b

Leave a comment

Comments 4

anonymous September 2 2018, 23:11:26 UTC
OMG.
OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGG
If this battle doesn't destroy the world, or kill our heroes, or turn the feathers on every chocobo within 100 miles pure white, there's going to be a lot of re-examining of the holy writings. To say the least.

Reply

turnippatch September 4 2018, 03:37:47 UTC
I tossed them into a convenient extra-dimensional location, so the chocobos at least are safe. =D

Reply


sunhawk16 September 3 2018, 10:15:23 UTC
Oh! Oh! Perfect... I love the Gundam... I mean, not Gundams. >_> Duo is just being so very awesome in this part, and MAN, have you embraced the cliff-hanger as a thing.
Is there a body count here?? I'm starting to hear that annoying voice that was at the end of every episode of the original Gundam "Who WILL survive??"
Not at all sure if Heero did a good thing or a bad thing... but it sure seemed like the only thing.. O_O

Reply

turnippatch September 4 2018, 03:54:27 UTC
Zero wasn't originally going to be in the story... Actually, I don't think Epyon was going to be, either.  Would probably have gone with other FF lore.  But once I remembered that Zeromus actually IS a legit FF summons, well, who could resist? ^o^' If I had a do-over, I'd probably go with naming all the previous espers after the various OZ suits, rather than just the Stones.

I wasn't cliffhangering on purpose!  But I wasn't about to sit on this (i.e. drag my heels) until it was all done.

Now, now, I went through a bit of trouble trying to figure out ways Epyon could incapcitate everyone without using his ginormous sword that couldn't not inflict major death and dismemberment.  It's all good!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up