"he sensed completion waiting for him there, so close"............................................... ..................I totally sympathize!!!.....cliffhangers, so frustrating! So glad he's not going in there alone.
I admit, the ending is a bit awkward here. I was typing along, got a few paragraphs past this, figured this part wouldn't change, so might as well just chop and post. So I apologize if it feels like I left off mid-thought there. But I figured any attempt to put anything more end-like on the end would just make it sound even more cliffhangery. ^^
I thought for sure you were going to have Heero go through that portal alone.... or wearing Duo like a muff. ^^; Kinda sad to see this winding down....
Heh, well, the portal did close promptly behind Dermail and Sylvia, so one would have to wonder whether it would close promptly after the first person went through. Which I didn't want and they probably wouldn't chance, which sort of means they'd all have to line up and go through together, but the image of them all standing neatly in a row, holding hands like grade schoolers preparing to cross the street, just didn't sit that well with me. ^^ Scene-jump to the rescue!
Guess I'll just have to find something else to write. =p I'm hoping to squeeze in a Haven before the year is out, but I don't have any other longfic in my pocket at the moment. (now soliciting ideas...)
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..................I totally sympathize!!!.....cliffhangers, so frustrating!
So glad he's not going in there alone.
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Guess I'll just have to find something else to write. =p I'm hoping to squeeze in a Haven before the year is out, but I don't have any other longfic in my pocket at the moment. (now soliciting ideas...)
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