I know I should make some comments about the plot (especially there being no demon, whatever that means), but I'm still too busy laughing at this part:
"Your 'come and take me'. I'll come and take you any day. Or take you and come. Either way."
Wait... guys? Let's go back upstairs... LOVE the Heero/Duo moment, (and poor Wufei), and glad you didn't kill Pargon. There is no demon... I'm baffled. And eagerly awaiting the next part. ^^;
Can't go back upstairs until they have their 'moment', now can they? =D
This is like the 3rd fic where it would have been convenient for me to kill off Pargan, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. ^^' But also killing off an ally is really hard to justify when you have a stinkin' white mage standing right there. -_- I've already toned the healing way down for the purposes of story, but...
This fic was somewhat longer before... and then I realized that a lot of the story was probably just intended to give the player more opportunities to do battle, so... things got cut. Hope I've stitched everything back up well enough.
So long, Dorothy. She was supposed to make her appearance right about now.
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"Your 'come and take me'. I'll come and take you any day. Or take you and come. Either way."
I love your Duo. :-)
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(much to wufei's consternation. ^^)
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LOVE the Heero/Duo moment, (and poor Wufei), and glad you didn't kill Pargon. There is no demon... I'm baffled.
And eagerly awaiting the next part. ^^;
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This is like the 3rd fic where it would have been convenient for me to kill off Pargan, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. ^^' But also killing off an ally is really hard to justify when you have a stinkin' white mage standing right there. -_- I've already toned the healing way down for the purposes of story, but...
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So long, Dorothy. She was supposed to make her appearance right about now.
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