fic - the faithful and the brave : 28 [novella]

Feb 15, 2017 23:42

Title:  The Faithful and the Brave
Part:  28

The Faithful and the Brave - Part 28 )

fic_novella, gw, fic_novella_f&b

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ramenkuri February 16 2017, 11:11:00 UTC
So happy to see a new chapter! Must go catch up

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turnippatch February 21 2017, 07:16:07 UTC
Bit of a lull here before getting into the next big set piece.

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sharona1x2 February 20 2017, 00:29:42 UTC
I know I should make some comments about the plot (especially there being no demon, whatever that means), but I'm still too busy laughing at this part:

"Your 'come and take me'. I'll come and take you any day. Or take you and come. Either way."

I love your Duo. :-)

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turnippatch February 21 2017, 07:17:47 UTC
There's just something about him that Heero can't help but be attracted to. =)

(much to wufei's consternation. ^^)

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sunhawk16 February 22 2017, 00:50:27 UTC
Wait... guys? Let's go back upstairs...
LOVE the Heero/Duo moment, (and poor Wufei), and glad you didn't kill Pargon. There is no demon... I'm baffled.
And eagerly awaiting the next part. ^^;

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turnippatch February 24 2017, 01:50:59 UTC
Can't go back upstairs until they have their 'moment', now can they? =D

This is like the 3rd fic where it would have been convenient for me to kill off Pargan, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. ^^' But also killing off an ally is really hard to justify when you have a stinkin' white mage standing right there. -_- I've already toned the healing way down for the purposes of story, but...

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sunhawk16 March 5 2017, 12:28:34 UTC
Ah, the struggles of converting game to fic... but you are doing an awesome job of making it believable.

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turnippatch March 7 2017, 07:50:17 UTC
This fic was somewhat longer before... and then I realized that a lot of the story was probably just intended to give the player more opportunities to do battle, so... things got cut.  Hope I've stitched everything back up well enough.

So long, Dorothy.  She was supposed to make her appearance right about now.

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