Fic: The Final Word Was Love

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[patster223]

MY WHEATSON. *cuddles FOREVER* I can't believe you wrote this for me just because I NEEDED it. God, you're so amazing.

I love the bit about drums in the beginning, it's a gorgeous lines and sets up the mood of the entire fic. And then the drums come to a halt when John comes, brilliant.

Another amazing thing is how Sherlock is all, "Kidnapping? UGH BORING," but then as soon as his thoughts land on John, he starts worrying. Heeeeeeeeeeeee. Like, screw bodily harm, what happened to his JOHN? SO perfect. And how Sherlock is so resentful that John has managed to become so important to him. Wonderful, just wonderful.

When Sherlock says John's name. Dude. That captured the exact feeling that I wanted with this, with the "My words just break and melt/Please just save me from this darkness" bit. That was the part of the song (almost typed snog there) that I wanted most and then you went and just PUT THE FEELING OF IT IN THERE SO PERFECTLY AND ALIFVHORGHRTHDFGIOH SO AMAZING.

“JOHN! GODDAMNIT, JOHN!” Sherlock sobs his name and it feels

[tunes84]

I WANT TO WRITE YOU EVERYTHING YOU'VE EVER WANTED.

I'd give you the moon if you asked it of me. <3

[patster223]

OH, DON'T WORRY, YOU WILL.

*demands moon*

<3

[tunes84]

*plots*

[rabidsamfan]

Aw... I love the ending.

[tunes84]

Thanks!

[darthhellokitty]

Awwwwwwww.

[tunes84]

:D

[disastrolabe]

Aww, very nice. Excellent use of the word "damn". :D

[tunes84]

haha Thank you!

[violetbruises]

*Squeals* So good! Just what the doctor ordered. :3

[tunes84]

*huge grin* I'm glad you think so! :D