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Fearful Passage [1/3]

Jun 27, 2012 15:13

Title: Fearful Passage [1/3]
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#avengers: natasha romanoff, !story: fearful passage, length: chapter story, #avengers: team!shawarma, pairing: natasha/clint, rating: pg-13, #avengers: clint barton

Comments 29

lizbet0 June 28 2012, 04:05:53 UTC

I agree, Fury doesn't just show up to check on his agents without having much to say to their worried partner. He's got something brewing, the magnificent b*****d.

I so hope you'll be able to continue this soon! (Or I may need a lollipop too.)

rayruz June 28 2012, 17:38:13 UTC

Fury is definitely a magnificent bastard.

*gives you a lollipop too*

I'm working on it.

helikedmyshoes June 28 2012, 15:28:58 UTC

Oooh you are evil Ray- but I'm not too worried because this has Fury written all over it (my phone wrote out written and rotten- ha!). I'm intrigued and excited about what's to come! Coming from you, I know it's going to be great. :)

rayruz June 28 2012, 17:38:51 UTC

LOL. Fury is pretty rotten isn't he?

I hope I don't let your faith in me down! :D Glad you enjoyed the evil.

serenity_pen June 28 2012, 16:38:04 UTC

I think you just tore my heart out. This was so incredibly sad but yet so amazingly tender. Your depiction of their interactions was wonderful, tender, thoughtful and just perfect. So looking forward to more.

rayruz June 28 2012, 17:39:45 UTC

*gives you a bandaid for the spot where your heart used to be*

I'm already working away on the next part. I want it to be just as good as the first. Here's hoping I don't disappoint.

aurora_0811 June 29 2012, 02:59:47 UTC

YOU TAKE IT BACK. YOU TAKE IT BACK RIGHT NOW. I'm not going to talk to you until you fix this. My heart is in pieces.

On a serious note, this was beautifully written and the emotions jumped off the page. I just can't handle the end so I will thank you kindly to deliver the next chapter ASAP!

rayruz June 29 2012, 13:18:18 UTC

:(

*wibble*

*cackles evilly*

I'm working away on Part 2.

thrace_adama June 29 2012, 12:51:02 UTC

Clint! Tasha! My babies!

Luckily for me, I know you'll take care of them in the end (right? right?!), but very well done with the cliffhanger, lady. Looking forward to part 2 and to finding out what, exactly, is going on here!

Also, the other Avengers as "liabilities"? LOL forever.

rayruz June 29 2012, 13:22:40 UTC

*twirls you*

Hey hon! Good to see you!

*gives you a lollipop* You're just going to have to wait and seeeee. :D (Though I think you've known me long enough that I just don't do completely tragic stories.)

Can you imagine Tony trying to do stealthy recon? It's not good planning.