What's Done Cannot Be Undone

[rayruz]

Title: What’s Done Cannot Be Undone
Words: ~650
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Setting: New Caprica
Summary: The night of the groundbreaking ceremony with a Shakespearean twist. Spoilers through Unfinished Business.
A/N: Written for 10_shakespeare part of a series of twisted BSG scenes.  Thanks so much to the wonderful workerbee73  for betaing!

Comments

[rayruz]

:D I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[emmiere]

What a fun read and very well done, I'm glad I clicked on this. :)

[rayruz]

Thank you so much

[lotus79]

Oh my god. I'm going to be late for work leaving a comment, but I have to...

I am a total Shakespeare fangirl, and now I want to hear this dialogue performed. Mmmmm.... (yeah, sonnets make me very excited! ;)

[rayruz]

Yay for Shakespeare fangirls! So glad you liked it

[thrace_adama]

Oh, wow, this was brilliant! Loved it, and was particularly drawn to these lines:

Lee: Indeed. So you shall tell Sam, and I, Dee.
However, not confess- profess.

This picked up on something I think was an important part of that scene--Lee saw telling Dee and Sam as a way to finally be free and happy, but even then Kara just saw it as a failing on her part that she'd be messing up her relationship with Sam. Well done.

And hey, you slipped in an Artemis reference! Awesome.

Can't wait to read your other challenge pieces. :)

[rayruz]

I'm so glad you liked this. :D

I will get around to the others eventually.

[eugis]

Wow, this is great! I love Shakespeare and I loved the way you made this scene work in iambic pentameter. Beautiful. :D

[rayruz]

Thank you so much!

Something BSG and Shakespeare both have in common? They both really understand people...