Remix-Redux fic: Transition (the "eight twisting steps to mudblood normal" remix)

[tuesdayfic]

Title: Transition (the "eight twisting steps to mudblood normal" remix)
Author: everysecondtues (fic journal manicjoy)
Summary: Draco's not okay, but he's getting better all the time.
Fandom: Harry Potter (books, diverges from canon after book four)
Pairing: Draco/Hermione (brief implication of Ron/Harry)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: JKR's characters, part of Riko's

Comments

[ontogenesis]

I haven't read the original, but I really like this story. There's a lot left unsaid but understood, and somehow that seems to fit Draco's character. I can definitely see Draco appreciating that Hermione doesn't pry, and has no problem with being sharp on account of his upbringing.

[tuesdayfic]

Thank you. <3 Should I take any message from your icon? >_>

I had a lot of fun writing this.

[azephirin]

I really liked this. The spare style works well for the state of mind Draco's in, and he and Hermione read very realistically. Lovely work.

[tuesdayfic]

Thank you! This was a little experimental style-wise, and I'm glad it works for you.