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The Wife 1/?

Sep 08, 2011 20:03

Title: The Wife 1/?
Author:tudor_rose445
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings:Arthur, Guinevere, Morgana, Uther, Merlin, Gaius, Arthur/Guinevere,
Spoilers: Seasons 1-3
Disclaimer: I own nothing. BBC owns "Merlin".
Summary: AU. As the wife of the prince Gwen knows that she is destined to one day rule beside him. Yet the road to the throne will not be simple ( Read more... )

fandom: merlin, character: guinevere, character: morgana, character: uther, rating: r, character: arthur, pairing: gwen/arthur, length: multi-chapter, character: merlin

Comments 23

javabreeze September 9 2011, 00:33:28 UTC

tudor_rose445 September 9 2011, 00:47:04 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

marsealove September 9 2011, 01:31:58 UTC

Great start to this story. So many internal musings, uncertainty and slight confusion between Arthur and Gwen. I'm sure as they get more comfortable with each other, they'll open up to each other about what they're thinking/feeling. I'm so happy Arthur is showing some patience with Gwen. It was very sweet of him to keep things innocent their second night together.

Everyone is so focused on Gwen getting pregnant, why do I feel like pregnancy won't come easy for her which honesty I'm okay with. She's still trying to wrap her head around being a wife and having an intimate relationship with her husband. I can't imagine a pregnancy being thrown on top of all that.

What's up with Morgana and Merlin? Have they interacted at all since she's been in Camelot? Is she still in love with him?

Again, awesome chapter!

tudor_rose445 September 9 2011, 02:48:22 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it. It will take some adjusting for her, but they'll get through it.

And Morgana and Merlin....You'll have to wait. :P

The Wife ap925344 September 9 2011, 02:17:23 UTC

I found this story posted on Once and Futures and loved it so much that I came to your blog and read the entire series. I haven't enjoyed a story this much in a long time ( ... )

Re: The Wife tudor_rose445 September 9 2011, 02:51:33 UTC

Can I hug you? :P That was so nice of you! I love when reviewers, such as yourself and marsealove for example put thought into their comments. It makes me excited that you guys really think about the fic.

I tend to stick with her POV because I find her easier, but my beta has been suggesting that I include more Arthur. I think I like having both of them telling their story.

Sexy time with the Pendragons. :P

Thank you!

minah_25 September 9 2011, 03:14:11 UTC

I was so happy to see that you posted the begining of the wife. It was such a great start. I loved the fact that When Gwen woke up she didnt run from Arthur but kissed him and started to see him more than a friend or somewhat of a borther. Then end was so sweet with him just wanted to hold her. I hope to see soon Gwen realizing her husband realllllyyyy wants her. Cant wait for the next udate.

tudor_rose445 September 11 2011, 05:55:01 UTC

It is going to take some time, but she'll start seeing him in a different light. Thanks for reading!

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tudor_rose445 September 11 2011, 05:55:32 UTC

I'm going to try to include more of him. My beta suggested it and it seemed to have gotten positive responses. Thanks!