Fatality [KHR!] [Fanfic]

[ephemeralize]

THIS IS FOR MY LOVABLE TWIN (rokakujin)’s BIRTHDAY. I SUGGEST THAT YOU MAKE YOUR WAY OVER TO HER LJ AND BOW DOWN TO HER FOREVER COZ SHE IS THE QUEEN OF AMAZING.

NOW. ♥

Title- Fatality
Author -ephemeralize
Rating - PG-15 for repeated swearing, autopsy talk; nothing too gory though.
Pairing - YamaGokuTsu, sorta not really okay fine barely there TsuHaru.
Warnings -

Comments

[rokakujin]

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! NEEDTO READ IT!!! I wish I'm splitted so I read both fics at the same time ;_; *needs to hurry up*

[rokakujin]

OMG I DID READ IT SO UNCONSCIOUSLY D: and I got irritated what kind of funeral you mean XDDD DAMNIT!!! but I understand it finally ...

AND IT'S SO TT________TT EMO TT____TT

and I love Gokudera for wanting a perfect wife for tsu!!! AND TSUNA'S SO DAMN CUTE!!!! STILL SO CUTE!!! ;__; “You’re all I have left, you know, just you and me…" this is what our tsu is, ne TT____TT

and the lyric is perfect!! it's so touching T_T I'm downloading the song and can't wait to listen to it!!!!

AND ♥ x INFINITY TOO!!!!

[rokakujin]

TAMM T3T

[rokakujin]

Gokudera is all loveable with his 'matureness' *3* AND ------ NO MORE WORDS CAN BE SAID TO EXPRESS WHAT I FEEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[anewsymphony]

asflgkjfhsjfla

omg ;_;

it was heartbreaking and bittersweet and unfff I loved it to death D:

“Gokudera…” The face swam into view, quiet and subdued, but it was hard to tell, hard to keep focus. “You’re all I have left, you know, just you and me…” Tsuna chuckled, gripping the hand even tighter, and meeting Gokudera’s eyes to grace him with the best fucking smile in the world-oh, oh, so maybe he was dead all this time afterall, unless- “So…don’t leave, hm?”

that bit just about killed me >_>

♥

[ephemeralize]

Bwuhhhh...♥ I'm lost for words, thank youuuuu so much, ilu.

GAAAH...I spent quite awhile working on that part, so THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU, I'm estatic that it worked out in the end!! ♥♥♥

[picnicbird]

I mean -- just -- like... how do I even begin. I was never expecting to read something this beautiful, and I can't say anything more profound than that, but that I absolutely love this fic and you've got Gokudera down pat, and your diction, the short, straightforward words, the short and straightforward sentences, going through each motion with this skepticism -- it left me with this knot in my stomach, and it's so sad, and God, you've got a beautiful style, everyone's so grief-stricken in this, and how you capture the aspects of it, I can't even say. I am amazed, but that hardly says it, the word "amazed" is pretty lame but I hope you know what I mean. This just jumped out and took everything.

OMG Mika -- a week or so ago I heard them do an interview on the radio and they were just -- the most adorable people, I couldn't even believe it, they were so funny and sweet and they did "Love Today" in the studio and my respect for them raised by a million percent -- ...this is officially the most rambling comment I've ever left someone

[ephemeralize]

O-oh. Laiiiii...you're so good at flattering, my ego's gone up a few notches right there. XDD If I were to be incredibly honest, YOU were the one who inspired me to write again, so guess where all the credit really goes to? ;DDDD ♥

I a;sldkfja Mika, I downloaded his entire cd right after hearing "Grace Kelly" and a;ldjfa my Last.fm charts have been shot to death and then some with Mika songs.

You are wonderful. The truth.

[picnicbird]

Not at all flattering; your ego deserves to go up those notches because I speak only the truth, y'hear?! What... well -- I don't quite know what to say to that. Except that I'm touched and can hardly believe it, but I will -- I'm very glad I could make myself that useful...! ;_; <3 So glad you're writing. Because -- you're an amazing writer.

OMG I love that song. I'm slowly hearing more and more of their songs, and they're so unique and cute while managing to fit so many more emotions into their songs. So cool.

No, you.

[ephemeralize]

Question is: How could I not? I remembered how fun it was to just work with words because I liked it and whothehellcaresifyoudon't kinda thing, YOU reminded me of that.:DDD

You're on my turf, sweetie. YOU.

[zephyr_design]

Damn,you just left me crying. I said crying! *wipes tears and blows nose* How did you have the courage to kill him? I think I ahteand love you at the same time. Ths was so beautifu, I wish I had words to tell you how much I loved this.

[ephemeralize]

BWUH, I DIDN'T MEAN TO. XDDD;; But thank you thank you thank you, I'm glad I was able to move you...to the point that you hate and love me at the same time. XDDD;;

...I liked Gokudera too much to realize he was gone. .___.;; -BRICK'D-

♥

[aori_tsuki]

Aw, Gokudera! Tsuna! Yamamoto, committing jumonji giri! Just. Just. LOVE. The imagery, the fact that Yama loved Goku but Goku loved Tsuna and that Haru knows and accepts the facts and just GUH.

You’re all I have left, you know, just you and me…” Tsuna chuckled, gripping the hand even tighter, and meeting Gokudera’s eyes to grace him with the best fucking smile in the world-oh, oh, so maybe he was dead all this time afterall, unless- “So…don’t leave, hm?”

That line killed me dead. DEAD.

[ephemeralize]

Thank you thank you thank you, guh, I'm so glad all my points went through well enough. ♥

-revives- Oh, that particular line was tricky tricky but-!! Guh, it's so worth it if you managed to find it great in the end, thank you so so so much, bwuh- incoherecy alert. XDD