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tsukinobotan

Red vs Blue: The Five Stages of Grif

Jul 11, 2007 04:19

Title: The Five Stages of Grif ( Read more... )

grif/simmons, slash, red vs blue, fanfiction

Comments 27

islandkitty91 July 11 2007, 09:31:05 UTC

Ooohhhh.

It's more beautiful than I ever imagined...

Excellent dialogue, and wonderful plot buildup. I'll wait for the next installment with bated breath.

balildevil July 11 2007, 09:34:14 UTC

Heheh that was really good.

We get a follow-up fic, right?... right!?

tsukinobotan July 12 2007, 07:44:23 UTC

I actually hadn't thought about doing a follow-up fic when I wrote it, but now that everyone seems interested in something, I'm starting to toss some ideas around. So, hopefully, yes.

balildevil July 12 2007, 08:48:43 UTC

Oh good! I think it'd be a great fic to carry on - I want to see how it plays out ^^

missy7280 July 11 2007, 10:22:05 UTC

That was really clever, the title and the whole idea! Very well done. :)

tsukinobotan July 12 2007, 07:45:28 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. This is actually my first RvB fic I've posted, so I really appreciate all the encouragement.

missy7280 July 12 2007, 08:25:14 UTC

It's really great then for your first time! Trust me, I know how scary it is writing in a new fandom. But if you hadn't told me I would have never guessed that it was your first. :)

I also forgot to say in my comment that a sequel is definitely in order. Next time Simmons needs to kiss the crumbs off Grif's face! (lol, dirty slashy thoughts XD)

tsukinobotan July 12 2007, 09:02:59 UTC

Yay, Grif/Simmons smut!!! Oh, wait. I have to write the smut. Why am I suddenly afraid I'm going to end up known as "The Chick With the RvB Food Fetish?"

camatie July 11 2007, 10:39:07 UTC

This is beautiful. Please tell me there will be more. :)

tsukinobotan July 12 2007, 07:47:43 UTC

Thanks! There will definitely be more, I'm just not sure if it'll be a follow-up to this or something from Grif's view. Or both. By the wy, I love your icon.

camatie July 12 2007, 08:16:58 UTC

Sweet! And thank you!

speechie42 July 11 2007, 23:12:55 UTC

I loved the ending. It wasn't your total chliched "they kissed and had hot sex and lived happily ever after" deal, but it had enough classic material to be sweet.

tsukinobotan July 12 2007, 07:53:35 UTC

Thanks! That means a lot coming from you. I haven't read all of your stuff (things have been a little crazy), but it's on my to-do list and what I have read of "The Bunker Chronicles" is great. I need to catch up on my RvB fic reading and send out appropriate adulation.

speechie42 July 12 2007, 22:44:59 UTC

Oh, thanks. *blushes*