Comments | tsukimineshrine: And I said I'd never write an AU

cal_reflector in tsukimineshrine

And I said I'd never write an AU

Jul 25, 2007 15:38

Hopefully people, 'specially the old members, are still around and checking on this community, because after a long hiatus I've finally written something worth posting here: An AU starring Touya Kinomoto as an ex-cop and gritty private detective in a rundown city and the rest of the CCS cast. The story is complete and finished, divided into two ( Read more... )

touya/tomoyo, nakuru, syaoran, sakura, touya, clow, tomoyo, kaho, touya/nakuru, touya/kaho

Comments 6

peacewish July 25 2007, 21:45:43 UTC

Well. Noir Touya. It's weird enough to be entertaining, and I'm curious enough to read the next batch. You're obviously having fun with it.

cal_reflector July 25 2007, 22:57:16 UTC

Was hoping you'd spot this; glad to at least piqued your curiosity. It was pretty fun writing this, for the most part; Nakuru and Syaoran make up a large part of that.

phantomness2001 September 24 2007, 18:18:42 UTC

It's amusing. ^^

cal_reflector September 24 2007, 18:38:07 UTC

I am to please.

cagedlark August 8 2008, 07:23:51 UTC

Me like!!! I'm a big Mystery fangirl so this is just too much fun!
Question: is Mirror's name Alice because of Alice in Wonderland?
And just one small suggestion, but this sounded kinda odd.
“Maybe you should, if doing so will gratify you.”
Didn't flow for me. The word gratify knocked me off for some reason...
Still love this fic though! Maybe there should be a mystery challenge.......

cal_reflector August 8 2008, 07:28:24 UTC

You're right, its a bit clunky.

No, I didn't think that far. But Kagami is Mirror in Japanese. In canon Mirror had a thing for Touya so I thought I'd leave that option out there.

This fic is complete, btw, just letting you know. I should've posted part 2 in the shrine. If not let me know.