LJ Idol, Season 11 - Week 5

[tsuki_no_bara]

Title: Yes for the Quiet Life
Topic: “My enemies are all too familiar. They're the ones who used to call me friend

Comments

[roina_arwen]

I really like the relaxed tone of this. I’ve been to Hawaii (mostly Oahu, but once to The Big Island and once to Maui) and I love it there! You definitely captured the feel of it.

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! i have also been to hawaii! honolulu and maui, but i really want to go to the big island too.

[roina_arwen]

I hope you get to the Big Island - the black sand beach is amazing!

[adoptedwriter]

Very engaging. Hawaii is a beautiful place. All I would want to do is hang out on the beach w cold drinks and pet dogs too.

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! and that's what i'd want to do too. i mean, the beaches are SO NICE and the ocean is SO BLUE and dogs are of course perfect. :D

[tigrkittn]

I enjoyed this. The idea of walking away and creating a new, quieter, simpler life is something I'll bet a lot of us can relate to.

[tsuki_no_bara]

especially when it's a quieter, simpler life in hawaii. :D and thank you!

[ellison]

I like this! It has a very calming tone to it, and I feel glad for the protagonist's new life he's built for himself. It sounds like a nice one.

[tsuki_no_bara]

i think it's hard not to build yourself a nice life in hawaii. i mean, hawaii. :D and thank you!

[static_abyss]

I like the sense of peace towards the end of this. It's refreshing to see a decision taken and stuck to.

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! and yeah, it's always nice to be able to say "i'm going to do this (or not do it) and i mean it".