LJ Idol, Season 11 - Week 2

[tsuki_no_bara]

Title: Two Months Is Too Long for This
Topic: Living rent free in your head

“Hey,” Chloe says, interrupting herself to gesture furtively behind me. “Doesn't that look like Marissa?”

I turn and look. “No.”

Comments

[bleodswean]

Lol! Perfect response to the prompt. I guess it's not really "lol" though because people do get stuck with other people in their heads and it can be nigh impossible to kick them out. Nicely written scene, C!

[tsuki_no_bara]

that was the first place my brain went after i read the prompt. i'm glad it worked for you! (and yeah, not so much lol if you can't stop thinking about someone who's totally done with you....)

[pixiebelle]

Poor Chloe! And poor Risa for having to listen to it lol but this was well-written and an enjoyable read!

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! usually chloe isn't so hard to be friends with, but anyone can be kind of a trial when they can't get over their ex.

[sweeny_todd]

I feel for Risa! I have been in her position and it suuuuuucks

[tsuki_no_bara]

it sucks but it makes you a good friend. :D

[orockthro]

This felt well done-- I liked how the two friends kept talking just past one another-- it felt very pointy which worked!

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! i may or may not have read it out loud to make sure it sounded like real people talking.

[me_sonrei]

I swear I have had this exact conversation with one of my friends. Substitute the names and the Art Noveau for a glass art exhibition in Spokane, and I'd say you must have eavesdropped on us. Well done!

[tsuki_no_bara]

i was hoping you wouldn't find that out.... i can eavesdrop from very far away. :D i'm glad you liked it!