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tsuki_bug

50 Word Excerpt #4

Mar 13, 2009 21:50

Week 4
Theme: still chocolate = )

The Rainbow Tree

Every year in the month of June
Upon twilight’s rising full moon,
The animals gather and enthuse
Around a tree of countless hues.

The rainbow tree is special, see.
It doles out treats for all, whoopee!
And on their backs they all will sprawl
To munch on colourful chocolate balls!

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Comments 13

torricus March 14 2009, 02:29:47 UTC

I think the delicious notion of a colourful chocolate ball distracted me from any potential literary irregularities :)

tsuki_bug March 18 2009, 16:01:21 UTC

Excellent = ) I wish I had some colourful chocolates for you, lol.

lilzazu March 14 2009, 03:33:52 UTC

mm chocolate balls yummy~~!

tsuki_bug March 18 2009, 16:02:18 UTC

Yay!!! *munches*

hellfire_angel March 14 2009, 03:34:45 UTC

No apologies, I love your colorful poems. *snatches up the chocolate and runs* *hugs you*

tsuki_bug March 18 2009, 16:03:43 UTC

Thanks Hellfire!!! *hugs back*

How are you? (Do I owe you an email?)

hellfire_angel March 18 2009, 22:59:49 UTC

Eh, so so. My week is not that good. Mostly family problems arising that are out of my control because of outside forces, but other than that things are fine.
Yep, you do. I thought you might be too busy though so I haven't been prodding that much. But whenever you have a sec to spare let me know what you're up to and I'll give you the rundown of all the excitement here when it really sinks in. *hugs tight*

stripedpetunia March 14 2009, 06:40:09 UTC

Aaaaand now Chocolate Salty Balls is stuck in my head. Good times, lol.

tsuki_bug March 18 2009, 16:05:42 UTC

Sweeeeeet.

sharona1x2 March 14 2009, 10:50:47 UTC

Lucky, lucky animals. ♥

tsuki_bug March 18 2009, 16:04:45 UTC

Lol, I'd like such a tree too = )