[fic] inability.

Mar 31, 2008 22:36

title→ inability.
pairing(s)→ kinda asaka kodai x fukasawa tatsuya.
summary→ it could be called growing up.

notes→ I have no idea. Honestly. I was trying to write something to lead into angry!Fukka, but I lost my train of thought and then it veered off and crashed somewhere and made no sense. I hate words when they don't cooperate with me. T_T ( ( Read more... )

group: j.j.express, pairing: asaka x fukasawa

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lovedrummer March 31 2008, 19:55:48 UTC
that was really cute... i like it! keep up the good work

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lrigelbbub March 31 2008, 21:39:23 UTC
I hate my connection sometimes. If you get two comments it's cause my computer is retarded.

YAY~ you finished it! I really liked it. XDD I don't think it crashes at all. You can see Fukka's anger, it's just subtle is all. I like the repetition all the way through it and how it changes at the end and that wasn't really all that coherent >>; heh~
be safe
-BG

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quin_tessen_ce April 1 2008, 02:27:43 UTC
FUKKA-CHANNNN. ;___; Asaka~~~. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

I really liked this fic... its bittersweet and perfect. I swear, JE really has to do something about Fukka-chan and Asaka soon... -sighs- I wish Fukka-chan was just a bit more selfish too... Anyway, great fic! Excellent, I enjoyed it quite a lot. ^^b

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yafit0159 April 1 2008, 18:58:32 UTC
its cute i like it^_____^

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harunomasu April 3 2008, 06:37:54 UTC
*is in speechless mode*

so simple, yet soooo beautiful~ i feel like i know fukka's pain for always being left behind. and the last line make me go "Kyaa!! Kyaa!!" for asaka and fukka. go, you two! ^^

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