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[RPF] Andrew/Jesse warning: possible violence, slight dubcon anonymous April 12 2011, 21:08:47 UTC
Andrew goes to jail (the reason is up to the author) and his cell mate is Jesse who most of the other prisoners keep a fair distance from. Andrew (let's be steroetypical) on the other hand gets a lot of unwanted attention from the other inmates (because he's so pretty) and approaches Jesse asking for pointers or something. The following day or something one of the inmates who regularly harrasses Andrew is suddenly sent to the hospital or something and Jesse tells Andrew not to worry and it's all been taken care of and from then on out the inmates leace him alone.

Basically this: yes the fandom agrees that Andrew is secretly a serial killer who goes after anyone who makes eyes at Jesse but how about a fic where Jesse's actually pretty damn scary too just in a quiet understated way that comes as a surprise for everyone and he makes sure that no one messes with Andrew.

Prison shower sex is an absolute bonus :D

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [3B PROPER/?] anonymous September 17 2011, 21:20:57 UTC
This story is fantastic! So well done! So well done! I cannot wait for more! :)

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fill | heavy in your arms [4a/?] anonymous September 18 2011, 13:32:52 UTC
Warning: Violence, serious non-con, humiliation, thoughts of suicide. This is the worst it gets though so...

Andrew doesn’t see the sky for four days either, and showers quickly, nervously, skittering out half-naked to where he can be seen to pull his shirt on.

It doesn’t help: they get him on the fourth day. He should have noticed, the showers are mostly empty when he gets there, but he is quite early, so he doesn’t think too much of it.

Then his exit is blocked, a knife made out of mirror and electrical tape put to his throat, his hands pulled tight behind him. They kick him to the ground, despite his faint struggles, all too aware of the knife near his throat.

“You might be Eisenberg’s little punk,” a voice says behind him once he’s flat on the cold tiles, his cheek pressed against the slippery floor. “But that’s just selfish, you’re much too pretty to be privately owned ( ... )

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fill | heavy in your arms [4b/?] anonymous September 18 2011, 13:33:52 UTC
The noise quietens, and he thinks, vaguely, that he’s been left there to suffer in his shame until he dies. But there’s a hand on his shoulder, and a voice, quiet, that says ‘Garfield, Andrew, hey.’

Andrew swallows around a hiccup, flattens his nose against the tiles, as if he could disappear into the ground. ‘Andrew, look at me?’

He does. It takes a mammoth effort, but he does. There’s a guard, one single guard, and he’s kneeling by Andrew’s shoulder.

‘Jesus.’ It’s Sorkin, which Andrew processes with some kind of remote relief. Sorkin likes Jesse, Sorkin isn’t all bad. (Sorkin let it happen.) ‘I know what they say you did, but JesusAndrew can’t think, is barely aware that there is now a towel around his lower half. He doesn’t want to move ( ... )

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fill | heavy in your arms [4c/?] anonymous September 18 2011, 13:35:30 UTC
Jesse comes back from isolation about half an hour after dinner. Andrew doesn’t open his eyes at the sound of the cell door sliding open beside his head, or at the noise of Jesse’s handcuffs coming off. There’s murmuring between Jesse and a guard outside, then Jesse says ‘oh,’ very quietly, sadly. Andrew’s neck burns with shame: now Jesse knows too ( ... )

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fill | heavy in your arms [4d/?] anonymous September 18 2011, 13:36:31 UTC
Andrew closes his eyes that night with the remnants of toothpaste on his tongue ( ... )

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [4d/?] anonymous September 19 2011, 07:53:27 UTC
omg, I am loving this. Thank you for writing it.

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [4d/?] anonymous September 19 2011, 10:47:27 UTC
I love cuddling tooooo! This is so painful and so good, keep going please!

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [4d/?] anonymous September 25 2011, 19:54:15 UTC
i'm kind of in love with this story. it's making me have all these emotions.. sdjhdajfks..

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [4d/?] anonymous November 14 2012, 15:30:12 UTC
I am really enjoying this fic, but I'm not sure how aware you are of how badly Andrew was just hurt. He was just gang-raped, right? Rape victims discovered by guards in prison aren't just sent back to their cells, they could die of an infection or venereal disease!

They get sent to the prison infirmary, where they are given the necessary medical attention and then remain there until they are healthy enough to return to the block. It would be completely unethical and against regulation to send Andrew back to his cell, and perhaps a sadistic guard may think about it, but Sorkin is supposed to be a 'nice' one, and even if he did, another guard might see oh, I don't know, Andrew bleeding through his clothes? And again, he would then be taken to the infirmary.

For that reason, I am not going to finish this fic, because that kind of glaring inaccuracy ruins the entire plot for me. Please try and research some basic elements of the universe you are exploring before you set a fic in it. Your writing style is great though.

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accrues November 14 2012, 23:45:05 UTC
Ok

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fill | heavy in your arms [5a/?] anonymous September 26 2011, 01:27:10 UTC
Andrew hears the alarm go off during work the next day, looked up, as many of the other inmates did, staring at the ceiling as if it will give them answers. One of the guards at the door yells ‘lockdown’, and many of the other inmates start cheering and laughing. Andrew has no idea what’s happening ( ... )

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [5b/?] anonymous September 26 2011, 01:28:14 UTC
Andrew starts marking time by events after that, stops paying attention to days as wholes, because it hurts too much to consider each passing day, each twenty-four hour period peeling away from his overall life ( ... )

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fill | heavy in your arms [5c/?] anonymous September 26 2011, 01:35:19 UTC
Jesse reaches into his pocket, and Andrew watches Fincher at the door stiffen as Jesse pulls something out, then relaxes when he sees what it is. It’s a long white envelope.

‘I don’t know if it’ll help,’ Jesse says, ‘but I hired a lawyer.’

Andrew’s eyebrows rise. ‘Are you appealing?’

‘What?’ Jesse asks, and he truly looks confused. ‘No, of course not. I took a deal for a guilty plea, there isn’t an appeal process because there wasn’t even a trial. The lawyer is for you.’

‘Me?’ Andrew asks, taking the envelope.

Fincher wanders over, checking that they’re working. Andrew slides the envelope under the pile of paper, letting it peek out a little to show he’s not trying to hide it, just filing it.

‘Want to borrow a book, David?’ Jesse asks, deadpan. ‘We have about five copies of Count of Monte Christo. One’s even in French.’ Andrew bites back a smirk ( ... )

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [5c/?] anonymous September 26 2011, 22:46:48 UTC
OMG this is a fantastic update. It's unsettling but tbh that's what makes it so great.

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Re: fill | heavy in your arms [5c/?] anonymous September 27 2011, 00:54:33 UTC
OH BOYS! I think I like the lovely quietness of the comfort part as much as the hurt.

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