I especially enjoyed the roleplaying Jack and James do at the beginning and the various incidents of Murphy's Law that disturb them. ;) Of course it wasn't nice to make Jack fall into a petal of roses, but it must have been a hilarious sight! *giggles* And it wasn't nice to make Jack ask for so many things when all James wanted to do was get on with their lovemaking, but it made me snort and it was most enjoyable!! Not the kind of *awwwww* sex that some people write (and that I write occasionally, too), but exactly the kind that you'd expect Jack and James to have.
LOVED. And Jonah and the zebra always make me giggle, too. ;)
By the way: Yet it was Jonah’s colors and not your’s that flew from her mast when she anchored in the harbor. VERY intriguing thought. Such a Jonah thing to do, really, and I believe that if anyone else had dared sailing the Pearl with his own colours, Jack would have killed him. Makes one realize how eccentric Jonah is and how Jack
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Delighted to see a new installment!!! So much fun and that nice little POP of angst at the end makes for a definite passion for more. More is coming, is it not? *hopeful smile*
Oh, yes, more to come! This is just a small prologue. Glad you enjoyed. Somehow, the role playing between Jack and James seemed perfect for this. *hugs* Thanks for commenting.
Sorry to contact you this way, luv, but I can't find your e-mail.
I am planning to write a sequel to my infamous "The Pirates who came for Christmas" from last year and I was wondering if you minded if I used you as a character in the story. You would have a dialogue, and basically it's about a Christmas party to which Jack, Will, James, Barbossa and Jonah are invited-- and all hell breaks loose! Other possible the_dala, Veronica Rich and Dr BillBongo (if I can get their permission.
Gee. You'd think Jack and James lusted after one another or something, maybe even love each other. *g*
P.S.If I don't always comment it's because sometimes it's too painful to read about Jack in his deteriorated condition. Plus, I'm allergic to lengthy WIPs. Sorry about that. I'll try to leave gushier feedback more often. :-)
Thanks so much for commenting. *gives allergy medicine* *pets* Look for Jack to make a jolly comeback in time for Christmas. Remember that box on my fireplace? *wink* I think the lid is about to come off!
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Will read it AT ONCE, just after I've had breakfast. *pokes at brain cells* WAKE UP!
*glomps you for good measure*
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. *loves* Precious, precious, precious.
I especially enjoyed the roleplaying Jack and James do at the beginning and the various incidents of Murphy's Law that disturb them. ;) Of course it wasn't nice to make Jack fall into a petal of roses, but it must have been a hilarious sight! *giggles* And it wasn't nice to make Jack ask for so many things when all James wanted to do was get on with their lovemaking, but it made me snort and it was most enjoyable!! Not the kind of *awwwww* sex that some people write (and that I write occasionally, too), but exactly the kind that you'd expect Jack and James to have.
LOVED. And Jonah and the zebra always make me giggle, too. ;)
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Yet it was Jonah’s colors and not your’s that flew from her mast when she anchored in the harbor.
VERY intriguing thought. Such a Jonah thing to do, really, and I believe that if anyone else had dared sailing the Pearl with his own colours, Jack would have killed him. Makes one realize how eccentric Jonah is and how Jack ( ... )
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Well, the day is young, and these ARE the Homicide Twins ...
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Sorry to contact you this way, luv, but I can't find your e-mail.
I am planning to write a sequel to my infamous "The Pirates who came for Christmas" from last year and I was wondering if you minded if I used you as a character in the story. You would have a dialogue, and basically it's about a Christmas party to which Jack, Will, James, Barbossa and Jonah are invited-- and all hell breaks loose! Other possible the_dala, Veronica Rich and Dr BillBongo (if I can get their permission.
What say ye?
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My email, should you need it in the future, love, is captsparrow4ever at yahoo dot com. :) This sounds so exciting!!
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P.S.If I don't always comment it's because sometimes it's too painful to read about Jack in his deteriorated condition. Plus, I'm allergic to lengthy WIPs. Sorry about that. I'll try to leave gushier feedback more often. :-)
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