That was utterly... AMAZING! I didn't think to breath until it was done. Fantastic action and I sat the entire time on the edge of my seat, nails firmly between teeth. DAMN!
Poor Jack & Jonah. OMG. Then, Will. What happened with the Pearl? EEE!!!!
It's killing me! I'm still here reading, just so's ya know, and DAMN! This was just the best chapter I've read of ANY PotC story in a VERY long VERY VERY long time.
That poem at the end. Who is the author and from what time period. Utterly fitting at the end there. OMG .. THE END! Is that the end of Jack and/or Jonah? Or Will & Gibbs? Or Norrington? EEEEEE!!
More! I'm at a loss for coherent thought; THAT'S how good this was. MORE SOON!
Yay! Thanks so much for your feedback! *worhsips* I'm glad the battle scenes seem to work as I had to do quite a bit of research on this topic. The song is "Acquiesence" from the 1992 album "No Exit" by Fates Warning. You can order it at Walmart.com for about 12.00 dollars. It seem to fit our greedy Jack so well. The finale is under way. *hugs*
Okay, please don't take this the wrong way but . . .
BITCH!!
;)
How dare you leave us like this?! Geez louise, I feel like I'm having a heart attack. So tense and so well-written. You must hurry and post the next chapter. I have to find out what happens and I'll be on tenterhooks until I do. And it's painful to be there!;)
Bwa-ha-ha-ha! Yes, I know I'm evil. Thanks, luv, for you feedback. More soon. Remember, Jonah told Jack he would exact a heavy price from him, and that's still coming. It might give a few readers a jolt. *pours rum* ;)
I have got to stop trying to read between the lines when you post these replies. It gets my hopes up so high. *must remain calm and work on my Turrow ficathon entry* I'll just go over here and suffer in silence, eh? :)
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That was utterly... AMAZING! I didn't think to breath until it was done. Fantastic action and I sat the entire time on the edge of my seat, nails firmly between teeth. DAMN!
Poor Jack & Jonah. OMG. Then, Will. What happened with the Pearl? EEE!!!!
It's killing me! I'm still here reading, just so's ya know, and DAMN! This was just the best chapter I've read of ANY PotC story in a VERY long VERY VERY long time.
That poem at the end. Who is the author and from what time period. Utterly fitting at the end there. OMG .. THE END! Is that the end of Jack and/or Jonah? Or Will & Gibbs? Or Norrington? EEEEEE!!
More! I'm at a loss for coherent thought; THAT'S how good this was. MORE SOON!
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BITCH!!
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How dare you leave us like this?! Geez louise, I feel like I'm having a heart attack. So tense and so well-written. You must hurry and post the next chapter. I have to find out what happens and I'll be on tenterhooks until I do. And it's painful to be there!;)
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