Drink Up, Me Hearties } Chapter 10 - Four of Pentacles

Mar 21, 2010 13:50

Word Count: 4577
Genre: Action, Romance, Angst
Ships?: Nearly all four - Luxord/Tifa, Xigbar/Mirage, sorta Vivi/Eiko
→Friendships?: lots, let's just say. xD
Characters: Roxas, Vivi, Luxord, Tifa, Xigbar, Eiko, Freya, Mirage, Vexen
→Cameos: Naminé, the Ladies
→Mentions: Lilo, Io, Xaldin
Rating: PG-13/R for language? I don't know how sensitive people ( Read more... )

[genre] adventure, [genre] action, & alternate universe, # fan fic, [ship] kh: mirage/xigbar, [ship] kh: luxord/tifa, [genre] romance, [fandom] video game: kingdom hearts, [project] drink up me hearties, [rating] pg-13, [ship] ff9: eiko/vivi, [genre] angst

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-brain exploded- trilies March 21 2010, 18:14:54 UTC
So let's just put down "everything Xigbar says" as my favorite line, okay?
Agreed?
Yesssss.
Although the Incredibles suicide reference makes me squeal. And then made me feel incredibly guilty.
And, just- fuuuuuuuck, Xigbar, YOU FUCKIN' JINXED IT. AND NOW XALDIN'S THERE. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY.
-rolls around-
Although I briefly wanted to murder Vexen because NICE WAY TO LEAD ME ON. AND THEN LEAD ME ON SOME MORE.

Whooo, incoherency.

And because he won't shut up about it, Tonymuse is quite amazed that he and Mirage are in the same city/island group/same thing together and it's Xigbar who pissed her off.

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fshhhh ts_soliloquy March 21 2010, 18:39:51 UTC
Incredibly guilty, ahahaha oh ow ow don't hurt me ow okay I'm sorry

x) Incoherency is fiiiiiine. ♥

Haaa, if it makes him feel better, I doubt the two of them have ever met in this universe? Beside the fact that they do technically live on separate islands and Mirage probably wouldn't need to go to a blacksmith very often - if ever - she's veeeeery much a woman of seclusion. It has to do with the whole "I gave up everything" part of the argument, but we'll learn more about that later. ;D

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Re: fshhhh trilies March 21 2010, 18:45:56 UTC
I just realized I badpunned, goddammit. xD

...Great, now he wants me to write fic. -facepalm-

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captain2010 March 21 2010, 21:49:16 UTC
I SCREAMED. LOUDLY.
XALDIIIIIN.

You're so awesome, Tuna.

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ts_soliloquy March 21 2010, 21:52:11 UTC
FFFFFFF CAN'T STOP SMILING. ♥

Thank youuuu.

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littlecatlost March 21 2010, 23:42:49 UTC
Forgive me if this comment is kinda lame and doesn't properly convey how much I loved this chapter. I'm not feeling all that wonderful atm. :/

I honestly couldn't possibly pick out just a couple favorite lines. I'd have ended up copy/pasting everything from that tense little scene at the luau, and the entire scene between Xigbar and Mirage. That scene... oh, wow. The whole thing was like a punch to the heart. I really wanted to reach in and give him a hug. *sniffs* :'O

Freya, Freya, Freya... that was harsh. Haaaarsh.

Mirage! My jaw actually dropped when I read she'd tried to kill herself. I get the sense by the way she talks that she was mistreated by men before even Xigbar came along, which might have lead to the mentioned suicide attempt? Why am I imagining there's a pirate!Syndrome roaming around out there? And I saw what you did there, throwing in that line from "The Incredibles." Pfft, that was good ( ... )

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ts_soliloquy March 24 2010, 04:26:00 UTC
Haha, to tell the complete truth the idea for using the suicide line was totally kaiyabeck's idea. ♥ But thank youuuuu.

Haha, Xigbar/Mirage died? I was unaware. ;D

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littlecatlost March 24 2010, 13:34:52 UTC
Pfft, I liked it. Nice touch. XP

Xigbar/Mirage dieing... that statement came pretty much from personal opinion. I am the one, lone weirdo freak out there that doesn't like the Xigbar/Mirage/Deadpool love threesome. *shrugs*

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ts_soliloquy March 24 2010, 21:01:55 UTC
Cat, you are not weird for disliking a ship. |D Anyone who says otherwise is being stupid.

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sparkism March 24 2010, 04:18:49 UTC
Tifa as a not-sword-fighting pirate is a strangely awesome image. Probably because it's Tifa, but whatever.

"Tifa’s cool little curtain thing"
ahahaha, oh Xigbar. xD and what perfect timing you have, of course~
“Oh, no - by all means, continue with the shameless foreplay. I like watching.”
skjdfksdf HOW do you always manage to make me want to ship all sorts of ridiculous threesomes? Tunaaaaaa.

man, the more I read of this the more I keep telling myself to get on with playing FFIX, grrr.
also, angry!Mirage is still freaking fabulous~

...you know I almost forgot Xaldin was in this story. well, going to be in it. whatever. NEED MOAR XALDIN NOW.
...AND TWO SECONDS LATER, YOU DELIVER. HOLY CRAP you are a mind reader or something, dude.

and dammit, every time you write Xigbar you make me fall in love with him all over again WHICH IS NOT A GOOD THING TO BE BEGIN WITH.

tl;dr I still love you, Tunadarling, lalala~ *dances*

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ts_soliloquy March 28 2010, 14:23:25 UTC
Fssshhhhh, goddamnit, Sparky, I've been trying so hard to resist Luxord/Tifa/Xigbar 'cause I totally friend!ship the last two but goddamnit. xD ♥

IT IS TOTALLY A GOOD THING XIGBAR IS AWESOME XD

♥♥♥

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sparkism March 28 2010, 18:47:19 UTC
Clearly you should consider writing fabulous Luxord/Tifa/Xigbar shenanigans, hm? HM?

♥ !

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Fff, I am so super late at replyinggg ts_soliloquy May 6 2010, 00:31:00 UTC
PSSHHHFH I AM SO GLAD YOU LIIIIIKE? ♥♥♥

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