Kingdom Hearts } At Least Once

[ts_soliloquy]

Word Count: 3248
Genre: Action, Romance...?
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Ships?: Vaguey vague Roxas/Naminé, slightly implied Marluxia/Naminé + Larxene/Axel
→Friendships?: Axel&Roxas, implied Luxord&Naminé
Characters: Roxas, Axel, Demyx, Saïx, Larxene, Luxord, Naminé, Marluxia
→Cameos: Xaldin, Vexen, Xemnas
→Mentions: Zexion, Xigbar, Lexaeus
Rating: PG-13

Comments

[kaiyabeck]

Oh.

Oh, Tuna.

This was... just... I have no words for this. I felt so much while reading this-- vindication that Marluxia was terrified of her, dread when I realized that her powers were out of control, and when she attacked Luxord my heart actually ached.

And the whole scene where Roxas talks her down is just so bittersweet and beautiful.

You've utterly blown me away with this. Fantastic job.

[ts_soliloquy]

{:D!!!!!!!

I don't know what to say because... dasfdsfafa. That's sorta how I began my comment on All In, so if you're feeling what I was feeling then... dsadkfsa; I-I count that as a job well done.

[ice_kestrel9]

I'm a total stalker No, I just followed a few links from kh_drabble... (I enjoy your writings greatly)

I love your portrayal of Namine and all her potential that no one else has every really thought about. And though Marluxia thinks of her as Little Miss Zero, his fear of Namine brings a new perception of events like none before. Luxord is still made of awesome as always! ♥ Your writing is brilliant and made of win. :D

By the way, I noticed your table and your wait-list-claim. Did you know that due to a recent cleaning of the Big Damn Table at fanfic100, pretty much every KH claim has been erased, and you can go claim the General Series now? Thought you'd want to know...

[ts_soliloquy]

...♥ That's... a lot of really lovely stuff to take in all at once.

I stalk people all the time. I mean- Oh, of course I remember you. :D You commented on Sorridere di Nuovo and (let's look in my emails) hey, Futility! And... err, that other Luxord one. I'm Ready for My Close-Up, there we are.

...dsfal;jfda I'm glad you think so! {:D I worry nearly constantly about my characterizations and if I've hit them with the head-canon baton too hard. (In my head, Kingdom Hearts is the universe where anyone can kick butt. If Mickey Mouse can become a badass, why not Naminé, right? xD)

ORLY? (...I apologize) Well, I suppose I'll have to go do that. Thank you for telling me! And for everything else.

I'm sorry, I babble when I'm flattered.

[sparkism]

FUCK YEAH NAMINE. \o/

the poor thing. ;3; it's so awesome seeing her kick ass and yet sort of sad. LUXORD MUST GET BETTER SOON SO HE CAN GIVE HER A BIG HUG.

This was really awesome, Tunadarling~ ♥

[ts_soliloquy]

Awww, thank you Sparky! As always. {:D

Somewhere in another universe that hasn't revealed its secrets to me, she's allowed to kick butt without losing control. |)

...OH NO I THINK I MIGHT HAVE TO WRITE THAT. THEY'VE ONLY HAD ONE HUG, HAVEN'T THEY? AND XIGBAR HASN'T HUGGED XALDIN ONCE HAS HE, STUPID MANLINESS. CURSE YOU OTFFFFFFFFFFSSSSSS.

[sparkism]

♥ !

It's probably too good of a universe if we're not allowed in. D:

....YEAH, YOU MIGHT HAVE TO. OR ELSE.
oh god I can see Xigbar and Xaldin skdjfksjdf
Xigbar: *hugs Xaldin*
*awkward silence*
Xaldin: ....What are you doing.

and then Xigbar would say something clever but it completely escapes me at the moment pffft

[ts_soliloquy]

Xigbar: ...8D?
Xaldin: D:<

AND THEN THEY THROW IT DOWN OLD SCHOOL. BREAK-DANCE BATTLE.

*de-lurks*

[koolsnowball]

Askjdkfjlkjs you are my new favourite writer, seriously. Just. I mean. Naminé. Roxas. Marluxia. Luxord. Naminé The interaction, the fight scenes, the stuff going on in the background, the inclusion of everybody, even if it's just a passing mention. It's... idunno, kind of depth-y

Re: *de-lurks*

[ts_soliloquy]

......I.

EXCUSE ME NEED TO RESUME BREATHING WAIT.

fdslkjf;lakjsd;lafj STILL NOT BREATHING PLEASE BE PATIENT. dslakjf;ldkajd;fa

Okay, let's try this. Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you.

But- I'm seriously not that awesome really I swear who told you this but of course I feel awesome because... augh you think you're incoherent? This is what niceness does to me. D:

Re: *de-lurks*

[koolsnowball]

^_^; Well it's true - you write about gen and explosions and friendship and cool things and it's just - uh - words. lol I'm totally a writer look at my grasp of language here AND YEAH you're cool and I'm going to have to comment on more of your stories and yeah.

I also realize I forgot to mention that I also loved the opening scene with Axel and Roxas carrying on a conversation while the lights flicker and go out and Demyx yells somewhere. I don't know, I guess it's cause it makes me imagine power-outages and general destruction around the castle happens often enough that everyone's used to it. Which, uh, probably is the case, since it's the Organization. ^^;

oh man pointless comment is pointless.

Re: *de-lurks*

[ts_soliloquy]

*uses Lexaeus disapproving face* Pointless comment is never pointless! (...Unless it is spam.)

D'awwwwwwwww. {:D! You don't have to if... you know, you don't want to. But apparently you do, so... Go right on ahead!

Friendship: best cemented with explosions.

(If Mythbusters has taught me anything, it is this.)

[ts_soliloquy]

:D TH- THANK YOU HOLY CRAP CAPSLOCK. I... wait let me figure out a way I can respond to all that.

Okay, firstly, thank you for your text spazzing. ;_; Second: Yeah, in my head the Organization was pretty much a big family in its 'golden age' (before they split for Castle Oblivion). They're sort of all any of them have. Erm, thirdly: Naminé using chains is mostly inspired by this. hahaha i'm not that original *bonks self*

(...I can't believe I remembered this, but did you comment on Ninety-Nine a million years ago? I saw your name in my inbox and knew I had seen it before.)

(AND HOLY CRAP YOU WERE THE ONE WHO WROTE ME THAT DEMYX/YUFFIE FIC I NEED TO MEM.)

[ts_soliloquy]

Oh believe me, family!Organization won't leave me alone. So many epic plot bunnies damnit.

(P-PERHAPS. I read all of the fics by you that pop up on my flist and review them when I have the time, SO I MIGHT HAVE)

(...TELL ME YOU'RE JOKING. NOOOOO. THAN THAT MEANS- THE LUXORD/TIFA? OH SHIZ WHAT COMMS ARE YOU A MEMBER OF?

oh effin' hell you're in like everything I am.)