WHAT AM I TO DO WITH ALL THESE FEELS I DOn@T UNDERSTANDSADSGBKSDG SDGDSG OKAY RESTARTING MY REPLAY TOMORROW OH GODD???
She dives into him, but that’s too graceful, too artful a term. That suggests beauty. No, instead, she throws herself into him, bats away his mind’s feeble resistance at such a complete invasion. She digs into him, she forges her way, and finds him.
He’s alive, but his soul, his essence, the core of him, feels more wormy than anything else, wriggling around on dying legs. Is that wrong? That he feels almost like an insect, burning in a baking heat?
I am so happy I decided to replay FF8 right now, because that prompted me to check out SquallxRinoa, and that let me find this fic, and this fic is amazing. You have managed to give the game an emotional cohesion it doesn't have (plot-wise, and in regards to the sometimes obsessive Squall/Rinoa dynamics), and the idea that Rinoa is Ultimecia is wonderfully circular.
It's also a fairly difficult concept to pull off, and you do so spectacularly.
Great writing, pacing, characterization, and plotting. It's touching, and creepy, and sad, and makes complete sense.
I am gushing, I know, but your fic is absolutely wonderful. Kudos.
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HOLY SHIT
BREATHES
MEGAN
SWEET
FUCKING
JESUS
WHAT AM I TO DO WITH ALL THESE FEELS I DOn@T UNDERSTANDSADSGBKSDG SDGDSG
OKAY RESTARTING MY REPLAY TOMORROW OH GODD???
She dives into him, but that’s too graceful, too artful a term. That suggests beauty. No, instead, she throws herself into him, bats away his mind’s feeble resistance at such a complete invasion. She digs into him, she forges her way, and finds him.
He’s alive, but his soul, his essence, the core of him, feels more wormy than anything else, wriggling around on dying legs. Is that wrong? That he feels almost like an insect, burning in a baking heat?
get out with your writing stylkei ciufckING CNA'T
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It's also a fairly difficult concept to pull off, and you do so spectacularly.
Great writing, pacing, characterization, and plotting. It's touching, and creepy, and sad, and makes complete sense.
I am gushing, I know, but your fic is absolutely wonderful. Kudos.
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